Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you often go to the library?
Thí sinh
No, I don't. I really go to the physical library, but I always go to the online library.
Giám khảo
What do you usually do in the library?
Thí sinh
Well, if I go to the library I will grab a cup of coffee or tea, sit down and browsing some fancy magazines I think.
Giám khảo
Did you go to the library when you were a kid?
Thí sinh
Yes, I did. And I went to library quite often when I was a kid. The cell phone is was not allowed to use the leisure activity is was go to the library.
Giám khảo
Do Chinese kids often go to the library?
Thí sinh
Well when I was a kid it was, but nowadays kids are more likely stay at home and playing with their iPad I think.
Do you often go to the library?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题,例如“really go to the physical library”应为“rarely go to the physical library”。建议使用更自然的表达方式,并避免重复。
Ví dụ: No, I don't often visit the physical library. Instead, I usually use online libraries to access books and resources.
What do you usually do in the library?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 回答中时态使用不当,且句子结构不完整。建议使用正确的时态和完整句子,并使用连接词使表达更连贯。
Ví dụ: When I go to the library, I usually grab a cup of coffee or tea, then sit down and browse some interesting magazines.
Did you go to the library when you were a kid?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: 回答中语法错误较多,表达不清晰。建议简化句子,使用正确的时态和语法,并清楚表达观点。
Ví dụ: Yes, I went to the library quite often when I was a child because we were not allowed to use cell phones, so visiting the library was a common leisure activity.
Do Chinese kids often go to the library?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: 回答中语法错误和表达不自然,缺少连接词。建议使用正确的语法结构,添加连接词使句子更流畅。
Ví dụ: When I was a kid, Chinese children often went to the library, but nowadays they are more likely to stay at home and play with their iPads.
× Well, if I go to the library I will grab a cup of coffee or tea, sit down and browsing some fancy magazines I think.
✓ Well, if I go to the library I will grab a cup of coffee or tea, sit down and browse some fancy magazines I think.
在并列动词中,前面用的是不带-ing形式的动词(grab, sit),后面也应该保持一致,使用原形动词browse,而不是现在分词browsing。
× And I went to library quite often when I was a kid.
✓ And I went to the library quite often when I was a kid.
在英语中,单数可数名词前通常需要冠词,library前缺少定冠词the,应该改为the library。
× The cell phone is was not allowed to use the leisure activity is was go to the library.
✓ Using cell phones was not allowed; the leisure activity was going to the library.
原句结构混乱,时态和语序错误。应将句子拆分并调整为正确的时态和语序,使句意清晰。
× Well when I was a kid it was, but nowadays kids are more likely stay at home and playing with their iPad I think.
✓ Well when I was a kid it was, but nowadays kids are more likely to stay at home and play with their iPad I think.
more likely后应接不定式to stay,而并列动词play前不应使用现在分词playing,应使用原形动词play。