Library— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Try to reduce filler words like 'uh' and improve sentence structure for clarity. Also, use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and avoid redundancy. For example, instead of repeating 'uh' and 'also', you can say: "I usually visit the library once a week because I enjoy reading both fiction and non-fiction books. Additionally, it helps me relax and focus better on my studies."

Ví dụ: I usually visit the library once a week because I enjoy reading both fiction and non-fiction books. Additionally, it helps me relax and focus better on my studies.

Gợi ý: Avoid excessive filler words and improve sentence flow by using linking words. Also, clarify your points with specific details. For example, you can say: "In the library, I usually read books available there. Moreover, I complete my pending college assignments because the quiet environment helps me concentrate."

Ví dụ: In the library, I usually read books available there. Moreover, I complete my pending college assignments because the quiet environment helps me concentrate.

Gợi ý: Reduce filler words and improve sentence structure for clarity. Use linking words to connect ideas logically. For example: "I did not often go to the library as a child. However, at school, we had special sessions where students could read books both online and virtually. Personally, I did not prefer going to the library much during my childhood."

Ví dụ: I did not often go to the library as a child. However, at school, we had special sessions where students could read books both online and virtually. Personally, I did not prefer going to the library much during my childhood.

Gợi ý: Work on sentence clarity and grammar. Use linking words to organize your ideas and avoid redundancy. For example: "Yes, I believe many Chinese kids often go to the library to find books when they have difficulties in their studies. This helps them access useful information and improves their academic performance."

Ví dụ: Yes, I believe many Chinese kids often go to the library to find books when they have difficulties in their studies. This helps them access useful information and improves their academic performance.

× Yes, of course I often visit library as I'm fond of reading books which are fictional and non fictional.

✓ Yes, of course I often visit the library as I'm fond of reading books which are fictional and non-fictional.

The noun 'library' is a singular countable noun and requires the definite article 'the' when referring to a specific place known to both speaker and listener. Also, 'non fictional' should be hyphenated as 'non-fictional' when used as a compound adjective.

× Uh, usually once in a week I go to the library, uh, not only for the reading but also it relaxes my mind and keeps me more focused in my studies as well.

✓ Uh, usually once a week I go to the library, uh, not only for reading but also because it relaxes my mind and keeps me more focused on my studies as well.

The phrase 'once in a week' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'once a week'. Also, 'for the reading' should be 'for reading' without the article. The phrase 'keeps me more focused in my studies' should use the preposition 'on' instead of 'in'. Additionally, 'not only for reading but also it relaxes' is awkward; adding 'because' clarifies the cause-effect relationship.

× Well, I usually like to, uh, prefer reading, uh, mainly the books which are available in the library.

✓ Well, I usually prefer reading mainly the books that are available in the library.

The phrase 'like to prefer' is redundant; 'prefer' alone suffices. Also, 'which' is better replaced by 'that' in restrictive clauses. Removing unnecessary fillers improves clarity.

× Uh, not only I read the books, but also I, uh, do many of my pending work of my college, uh, which, uh, I think that, uh, it's a quite place to me to completely focused on my studies as well.

✓ Not only do I read books, but I also do much of my pending college work, which I think is a quiet place for me to completely focus on my studies as well.

The sentence has incorrect word order in 'not only I read'; it should be 'not only do I read'. 'Many of my pending work' is incorrect because 'work' is uncountable; 'much of my pending work' is correct. 'Quite place' should be 'quiet place'. 'To completely focused' should be 'to completely focus'. The sentence is restructured for clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Not really. But, uh, when I was in a school, uh, we used to have a extra lecture allocated for the library in which, uh, the students can go to the library for, uh, reading some of the books, uh, on the online mode as well as on the virtual mode as well.

✓ Not really. But, uh, when I was in school, uh, we used to have an extra lecture allocated for the library in which, uh, the students could go to the library to read some of the books, uh, in online mode as well as in virtual mode.

The phrase 'in a school' is incorrect; 'in school' is the correct expression when referring to attending school. 'A extra' should be 'an extra' because 'extra' begins with a vowel sound. 'Can' is changed to 'could' to match past tense. 'For reading some of the books' is better as 'to read some of the books'. 'On the online mode' and 'on the virtual mode' should be 'in online mode' and 'in virtual mode' respectively.

× Uh, and uh, in my childhood, I was not a, uh, preferred to go to the library, uh, so much.

✓ Uh, and uh, in my childhood, I did not prefer to go to the library so much.

The phrase 'I was not a preferred' is incorrect; the correct form is 'I did not prefer'. The sentence is simplified for clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Yes, of course, I do believe that most of the kids are often used to go to the library for hanging for some of the books if they find it more difficulties in their studies as well so that they can get some of the informations that are related to the studies.

✓ Yes, of course, I do believe that most kids often go to the library to borrow some books if they find difficulties in their studies so that they can get information related to their studies.

The phrase 'are often used to go' is incorrect; 'often go' is correct. 'For hanging for some of the books' is incorrect; 'to borrow some books' is appropriate. 'It more difficulties' should be 'difficulties'. 'Some of the informations' is incorrect because 'information' is uncountable and does not take 's'. The sentence is rephrased for clarity and correctness.

× So it may be helpful for the overall upliftment of the student as well.

✓ So it may be helpful for the overall improvement of the students as well.

The word 'upliftment' is uncommon and awkward; 'improvement' is more appropriate. 'Student' should be plural 'students' to match 'most kids' mentioned earlier.