Library— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误，如“I'm not usually go”应为“I don't usually go”，且表达不够自然。建议简化句子结构，避免重复表达，并使用更准确的词汇描述环境，如“noisy”代替“crude”。

Ví dụ: No, I don't usually go to the library because it is often noisy and crowded during peak hours. Also, it's hard to find a seat, so I prefer studying at home where it's quieter and more comfortable.

Gợi ý: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不清晰，如“supporting my SH”和“went to level”不明确。建议使用完整且准确的句子，清楚说明目的和细节，并使用连接词使表达更连贯。

Ví dụ: I usually go to the library to find references for my school homework. For example, last month I needed to write an essay about environmental issues, so I searched for books and articles related to eco-friendly topics.

Gợi ý: 回答表达基本清楚，但“church area”可能是误用，应为“children's area”。建议注意词汇准确性，并使用连接词使句子更流畅。

Ví dụ: Yes, when I was a child, I often went to the children's section of the library. They had storybooks like Cinderella and Snow White, and there were also toys that I found very attractive.

Gợi ý: 回答中语法和表达不够准确，如“electronic development is more popular than the visitor”不通顺。建议使用更自然的表达方式，明确观点，并使用连接词增强逻辑性。

Ví dụ: I don't think so. Nowadays, with the development of electronic devices, many children prefer to search for information online rather than going to the library.