Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you often go to the library?
Thí sinh
Yes, I often go to that library but most of the time by purpose isn't radio. I just want to found a quiet place to study.
Giám khảo
What do you usually do in the library?
Thí sinh
Usually I don't read a library, I just do my homework, read the PPT which teacher have teached.
Giám khảo
Did you go to the library when you were a kid?
Thí sinh
Yes I did apparently went to library when I was a kid because at that time my purpose was really add books of time. I will buy the book after I read what I.
Giám khảo
Do Chinese kids often go to the library?
Thí sinh
No, I don't think so. When I was a kid, there are no friends invited me to go to library most of our time. They were invited me to swimming, to running, to basket, play basketball, but just not library.
Do you often go to the library?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: 回答不够自然,语法错误较多,表达不清晰。建议简化句子结构,直接表达去图书馆的原因,并注意时态和词汇的正确使用。
Ví dụ: Yes, I often go to the library because I need a quiet place to study.
What do you usually do in the library?
Điểm: 45.0Gợi ý: 回答内容不够连贯,语法错误明显,表达不准确。建议直接回答主要活动,并用连接词丰富细节。
Ví dụ: Usually, I don't read books in the library. Instead, I do my homework and review the PowerPoint slides that my teacher has taught.
Did you go to the library when you were a kid?
Điểm: 40.0Gợi ý: 回答语法错误严重,表达不清楚。建议用简单句子清晰描述过去去图书馆的经历和原因。
Ví dụ: Yes, I went to the library when I was a kid because I liked to read books. After reading, I sometimes bought the books I liked.
Do Chinese kids often go to the library?
Điểm: 45.0Gợi ý: 回答中语法和表达错误较多,句子不连贯。建议用更准确的句子表达观点,并用连接词使内容连贯。
Ví dụ: No, I don't think many Chinese kids often go to the library. When I was a kid, my friends usually invited me to play sports like swimming or basketball, but rarely to the library.
× I just want to found a quiet place to study.
✓ I just want to find a quiet place to study.
这里的动词应使用原形find,而不是过去式found,因为动词want后面接动词不定式。
× Usually I don't read a library, I just do my homework, read the PPT which teacher have teached.
✓ Usually I don't read in the library, I just do my homework and read the PPT which the teacher has taught.
动词read后面需要介词in来表示地点;teacher前应加定冠词the;动词have teached错误,正确为has taught,teached不是teach的过去分词。
× Yes I did apparently went to library when I was a kid because at that time my purpose was really add books of time.
✓ Yes, I did. Apparently, I went to the library when I was a kid because at that time my purpose was really to add books over time.
did后面不接过去式went,应直接用went表示过去时;缺少冠词the;表达目的时应使用不定式to add;表达时间段应使用over time。
× I will buy the book after I read what I.
✓ I will buy the book after I read it.
句子结构不完整,缺少宾语it,导致句意不明。
× When I was a kid, there are no friends invited me to go to library most of our time.
✓ When I was a kid, there were no friends who invited me to go to the library most of the time.
过去时态应使用were而非are;缺少关系代词who引导定语从句;缺少定冠词the;时间表达应为most of the time。
× They were invited me to swimming, to running, to basket, play basketball, but just not library.
✓ They invited me to swim, to run, to play basketball, but not to the library.
动词invite后接动词应使用动词原形swim、run、play;basket应改为play basketball;缺少介词to;缺少定冠词the。