Library— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Votre réponse est claire mais manque de fluidité naturelle et contient des répétitions inutiles. Essayez d'éviter les hésitations comme "umm" et les répétitions comme "the the". Utilisez des phrases plus courtes et plus directes pour améliorer la clarté.

Ví dụ: Yes, I go to the library every day these days because when I study at home, I get distracted by my phone and social media.

Gợi ý: Votre réponse manque de structure claire et contient des phrases incomplètes. Essayez de formuler une phrase principale claire suivie de détails spécifiques, en évitant les répétitions inutiles et en complétant vos idées.

Ví dụ: I usually study in the library because I am pursuing a master's degree. For example, I spend time revising for my exams and preparing for the health exam.

Gợi ý: Votre réponse est correcte mais pourrait être plus naturelle en évitant les répétitions et en utilisant des temps verbaux appropriés. Par exemple, évitez de dire "I stayed at home or I was staying at home" et préférez une seule forme cohérente.

Ví dụ: Actually, I didn't use to go to the library as a child. Instead, I studied at home with my mom, who helped me with my homework and exam preparation.

Gợi ý: Votre réponse manque de clarté et contient des erreurs grammaticales. Essayez d'utiliser des phrases complètes et de mieux organiser vos idées avec des mots de liaison pour rendre votre réponse plus cohérente.

Ví dụ: Yes, Chinese kids are very disciplined. After school, they often stay in the library to finish their homework and sometimes prepare for exams, so they don't waste time.

× Yes, this period I go every day to the library to study.

✓ Yes, during this period I go to the library every day to study.

The phrase 'this period' is better expressed as 'during this period' to indicate the time frame correctly. Also, the word order 'go every day to the library' is awkward; 'go to the library every day' is the correct order in English.

× For instance when I stay at home I keep using my phone and umm scrolling the the apps so I don't focus.

✓ For instance, when I stay at home, I keep using my phone and umm scrolling through the apps, so I don't focus.

The preposition 'through' is needed after 'scrolling' to indicate the action of moving through the apps. Also, commas are added for clarity.

× I'm currently pursuing a master degree so I spend some time revising for my exams and also I'm preparing for the health exam so I am.

✓ I'm currently pursuing a master's degree, so I spend some time revising for my exams, and also I'm preparing for the health exam.

The phrase 'master degree' should be 'master's degree' to correctly use the possessive form. Also, the sentence is corrected for clarity and punctuation.

× Actually, I didn't used to go to the library during my childhood.

✓ Actually, I didn't use to go to the library during my childhood.

After 'didn't', the base form of the verb should be used, so 'use' instead of 'used'. 'Didn't used to' is incorrect.

× In fact, I stayed at home or I was staying at home to study with my mom.

✓ In fact, I stayed at home to study with my mom.

Using both 'stayed' and 'was staying' is redundant. The simple past 'stayed' is sufficient and more appropriate here.

× She was helping me to do my homework and prepare to my exams.

✓ She was helping me to do my homework and prepare for my exams.

The correct preposition after 'prepare' is 'for', not 'to'. 'Prepare for exams' is the standard expression.

× After school, they stay at the library to finish their homework and prepare sometimes for their exams so they don't waste time in doing.

✓ After school, they stay at the library to finish their homework and sometimes prepare for their exams so they don't waste time doing other things.

The adverb 'sometimes' should be placed before the verb 'prepare'. Also, 'waste time in doing' is incorrect; it should be 'waste time doing'. Added 'other things' for clarity.