LibraryPart 1 Báo cáo

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Part 1

Giám khảo

Do you often go to the library?

Thí sinh

I go to the library about twice a week because I need to research a lot of information and I need to study for my English.

Giám khảo

What do you usually do in the library?

Thí sinh

I always use the computer to read the paper and umm, I will read the book to support my opinion. It is very important things to me.

Giám khảo

Did you go to the library when you were a kid?

Thí sinh

Umm, actually no. Umm, when I umm, I went to library first time is when I am when I was a junior high student. Umm, I went to library for taste.

Giám khảo

Do Chinese kids often go to the library?

Thí sinh

Yes, I think so. Umm, because Chinese parents always want umm, kids read a lot of books, a lot of information and and they have to realize all the knowledge.

Đánh giá

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Part 1

Do you often go to the library?

Điểm: 75.0

Gợi ý: 回答较为直接,但句子结构简单,且有重复表达“need to”。建议避免重复,使用更自然流畅的表达方式。

Ví dụ: I usually visit the library twice a week to research information and improve my English skills.

What do you usually do in the library?

Điểm: 65.0

Gợi ý: 回答中有语法错误和不自然的表达,如“read the paper”和“important things to me”。建议使用更准确的词汇和句子结构,并减少口头语。

Ví dụ: I usually use the computer to read newspapers and books that help me support my opinions, which I find very important.

Did you go to the library when you were a kid?

Điểm: 50.0

Gợi ý: 回答中有多处语法错误和重复的口头语,表达不清晰。建议简化句子,避免重复,并清楚表达时间和原因。

Ví dụ: Actually, I first went to the library when I was in junior high school because I wanted to explore different books.

Do Chinese kids often go to the library?

Điểm: 60.0

Gợi ý: 回答中有语法错误和重复口头语,表达不够流畅。建议使用更准确的句子结构,避免重复,并清晰表达观点。

Ví dụ: Yes, I believe many Chinese children often visit libraries because their parents encourage them to read extensively and gain knowledge.

Ngữ pháp

Verb in the present participle form

× I always use the computer to read the paper and umm, I will read the book to support my opinion.

I always use the computer to read the paper and umm, I read books to support my opinion.

这里的句子描述的是习惯性动作,应该使用一般现在时而不是将来时“will read”。将来时用法不符合语境。建议将“will read”改为“一般现在时”的“read”。

Singular and plural issue

× It is very important things to me.

They are very important things to me.

“things”是复数,主语和谓语动词需要保持一致。原句中主语用单数“it”,谓语用单数“is”,与复数名词“things”不匹配。应将主语改为复数“they”,谓语改为“are”。

Article errors

× when I umm, I went to library first time is when I am when I was a junior high student.

when I umm, I went to the library for the first time when I was a junior high student.

“library”前缺少定冠词“the”,表示特指的图书馆;“first time”前应加定冠词“the”表示第一次。原句中缺少这些冠词,导致表达不准确。

Verb tense issue

× I went to library for taste.

I went to the library to try it out.

“for taste”表达不自然,且“library”前缺少定冠词“the”。应使用更合适的表达“to try it out”表示尝试去图书馆。

Incorrect use of prepositions

× because Chinese parents always want umm, kids read a lot of books, a lot of information and and they have to realize all the knowledge.

because Chinese parents always want kids to read a lot of books, a lot of information, and they have to acquire all the knowledge.

动词“want”后应接不定式“to read”,而不是直接接动词原形“read”。另外,“realize all the knowledge”用词不当,应改为“acquire all the knowledge”表示获得知识。

Từ vựng trọng tâm

HighTall; High-ranking; Inflated; Strong; Favorable
ImportantSignificant; Main; Powerful
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