Library— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Give a direct topic sentence and correct small grammar errors. Keep it natural and concise (max 3–4 short sentences). Mention frequency, a recent visit with correct time expression, and a specific detail about what you read. Use linking words if you add extra detail (for example, “and” or “because”).

Ví dụ: Yes, I go to the library quite often. This morning I visited to read a short story that I found very appealing because of its interesting characters. I usually go there once or twice a week to read fiction and newspapers.

Gợi ý: Start with a clear topic sentence that directly answers the question. Use precise vocabulary (e.g., newspapers, novels, non-fiction) and correct linking words (“especially” not “specially”). Avoid repetitive phrases and keep within 3–4 sentences. Provide a brief reason or preference to enrich the answer.

Ví dụ: I usually read a variety of materials in the library, especially newspapers, novels and non-fiction books. I prefer novels when I want to relax, but I read newspapers to keep up with current events. Sometimes I also borrow documentaries or reference books for study purposes.

Gợi ý: Answer directly and use accurate time expressions. Avoid uncertainty words like “probably” when you can be more definite. Keep it concise and add one specific memory or reason to support your answer.

Ví dụ: Yes, I started going to the library when I was very young, around eight or nine years old. I remember borrowing picture books about animals, which made me enjoy reading early on.

Gợi ý: Give a clear opinion and support it with a specific reason or example. Avoid vague phrases like “it depends on them” unless you explain why. Use linking words to connect your opinion and support (for example, “because” or “however”).

Ví dụ: Many Chinese children do visit libraries, especially those whose schools encourage reading because libraries are part of their homework routine. However, attendance varies: children in cities tend to visit more often than those in rural areas due to better access.

× Most recently I went to the library in this morning and I read about a story which I found quite appealing.

✓ Most recently I went to the library this morning and I read a story that I found quite appealing.

Replace 'in this morning' with 'this morning' because 'in' is not used with 'this morning'. Also change 'read about a story' to 'read a story' and 'which' to 'that' for natural restrictive clause use. Use simple past 'went' and 'read' to match the past time reference.

× Usually I read several topics in the library, specially newspaper novels and also documentaries.

✓ Usually I read on several topics in the library, especially newspaper articles, novels and documentaries.

Use 'especially' (not 'specially') and correct the collocations: 'read on topics' or 'read about topics' is better; 'newspaper novels' is incorrect—separate 'newspaper articles' and 'novels'. Also add commas for clarity.

× Apart from that, I also enjoy reading story books in the library.

✓ Apart from that, I also enjoy reading storybooks in the library.

Combine 'story books' into the single word 'storybooks' or use 'story books' as 'story books' is uncommon; no article needed here. 'Storybooks' is the correct noun form.

× As far as I remember, I probably started going to the library from a very young age, which I think would be nearly a decade ago.

✓ As far as I remember, I probably started going to the library at a very young age, which I think was nearly a decade ago.

Use 'at a very young age' instead of 'from'. For a past time reference, use 'was nearly a decade ago' rather than 'would be'. Keep tense consistent: 'started' is past, so use past 'was'. 'Probably' with past is acceptable.

× Actually, it depends on them.

✓ Actually, it depends on the child or the family.

The original 'it depends on them' is vague and uses a plural pronoun without clear antecedent. Replace with a specific noun phrase to clarify the subject. Alternatively 'it depends on the child' fits singular 'kid' context.

× As far as I know, Chinese kids often go to the library and read several different subjects.

✓ As far as I know, Chinese kids often go to the library and read about several different subjects.

Use 'read about several different subjects' rather than 'read several different subjects' because 'read subjects' is unnatural; 'about' clarifies they read material on those subjects. 'Several different' is acceptable but ensure verb-object collocation is correct.