Library— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more concise and correct small grammar mistakes. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give a brief, specific recent example. Avoid redundancy and fix articles/time expressions (e.g., "this morning").

Ví dụ: Yes, I go to the library quite often. For example, this morning I spent an hour reading a short story that I found very appealing because of its surprising ending.

Gợi ý: Organize the answer with a clear topic sentence and use linking words to list activities. Use correct word forms and sentence structure (e.g., "newspapers, novels, documentaries, and geography books"). Add one specific detail to show depth.

Ví dụ: I usually read a variety of materials in the library. For instance, I read newspapers, novels, documentaries, and geography books, and I particularly enjoy history books because they help me understand past events in depth.

Gợi ý: Give a direct, grammatically correct response and add a short supporting detail (why or what you did). Correct time reference ("about" not "would probably").

Ví dụ: Yes, I did go to the library when I was a child. I remember going there about 12 years ago to borrow picture books and attend storytime sessions.

Gợi ý: Use correct grammar and make the statement more precise. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give a specific reason or example. Correct forms: "They are fond of" and "make it part of".

Ví dụ: Yes, many Chinese children visit libraries regularly. They are fond of reading and often use the library to finish homework or join reading clubs, which makes library visits part of their routine.

× Of course, I go to the library quite frequently. Most recently I went to the library in this morning and I read about a story which I found quite appealing.

✓ Of course, I go to the library quite frequently. Most recently I went to the library this morning and I read a story that I found quite appealing.

The phrase 'in this morning' is incorrect; use 'this morning' for a recent time reference. Also 'read about a story' is unnatural: use 'read a story' or 'read about a story' depending on meaning. 'Which' is acceptable but 'that' is more natural in defining relative clauses. Suggestion: use 'this morning' and 'read a story that I found quite appealing.' Grammar problem type ID: 6

× Usually I read several subjects in the library such as newspaper novels as well as documentaries and also geographical books.

✓ Usually I read various materials in the library, such as newspapers, novels, documentaries, and geography books.

The original lists items awkwardly and mislabels categories ('newspaper novels' is incorrect). Use a clear list with commas and the conjunction 'and' before the last item. Replace 'several subjects' with 'various materials' or 'different kinds of books' for natural phrasing. Ensure parallel structure in the list. Grammar problem type ID: 26

× Apart from that, historical books my favorite.

✓ Apart from that, historical books are my favorite.

The sentence is missing the verb 'are' to link subject and complement. This is a sentence structure error; add the copular verb 'are' to make a complete sentence. Suggestion: 'Historical books are my favorite.' Grammar problem type ID: 23

× As far as I remember, I went to the library when I was a kid. I think it would probably 12 years ago.

✓ As far as I remember, I went to the library when I was a kid. I think it was probably 12 years ago.

Using 'would probably 12 years ago' is ungrammatical. To refer to a past time, use the past simple 'was' or 'happened' plus the time expression: 'it was probably 12 years ago.' 'Would' is not appropriate here. Suggestion: use 'I think it was probably 12 years ago.' Grammar problem type ID: 5

× They fond of reading and completing their homework in the library and they make it's a part of their homework routine.

✓ They are fond of reading and of completing their homework in the library, and they make it part of their homework routine.

The sentence misses the auxiliary verb 'are' after 'They' ('They are fond of...'). 'They make it's a part' is incorrect: 'it's' is a contraction of 'it is' and is unnecessary; use 'make it part of their routine.' Also ensure parallel structure: 'fond of reading and of completing' or 'fond of reading and completing.' Suggestion: include 'are' and use 'make it part of their routine.' Grammar problem type ID: 12}]} jossaailure)section.