Library— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more concise and natural. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one specific supporting detail using a linking word. Avoid repeating ideas and small grammatical mistakes (e.g., article use: "a psychology reference book"). Improve pronunciation of common words and reduce filler words.

Ví dụ: Yes, I often go to the library to find reference books for my assignments. For example, last week I borrowed a psychology reference book to help me with a research paper.

Gợi ý: Make a clear topic sentence about your main activity (e.g., study, research, borrow books). Use linking words (because, so, for example) correctly, and keep sentences short and grammatical. Provide one specific activity and one clear example. Avoid unclear phrases like "to receive too much information."

Ví dụ: I usually study and borrow books in the library because I need reliable sources for my assignments. For example, last week I borrowed several psychology books to gather ideas for an essay.

Gợi ý: Use correct tense and simpler phrasing. Start with a clear past-tense sentence, then add one or two specific details linked with a word like "because" or "for example." Avoid double negatives and many fillers such as "uh."

Ví dụ: Yes, I often went to the library as a child because our home didn't have a computer. For example, in primary school I borrowed books to help me with class projects and simple research.

Gợi ý: Be careful with generalizations and unclear wording. Give a balanced, specific answer: state your opinion, then support it with a reason and an example. Avoid slang or informal words like "dudes" and reduce fillers. Use clear contrast language when mentioning exceptions (e.g., "however").

Ví dụ: Yes, many Chinese children do use libraries because they need quiet places and access to books for homework. However, some families cannot afford transportation or access, so those children may rely on school resources instead.

× Yes I do. I always go to the library because I need to look for some reference books to finish my assignments.

✓ Yes, I do. I always go to the library because I need to look for reference books to finish my assignments.

Minor present tense/usage: 'to look for some reference books' is acceptable but 'some' is unnecessary; remove for conciseness. Also add missing comma after 'Yes' for correct written format. Suggestion: Keep simple present for habitual actions.

× For example, last week I went to the library to look for some psychology reference book.

✓ For example, last week I went to the library to look for some psychology reference books.

The noun 'book' should be plural because 'some' implies more than one or an unspecified number. Use plural 'books' to match 'some'.

× I usually to share some useful book for my assignment and daily things in library because I need to receive too much information and reference book to get ideas.

✓ I usually use the library to find useful books for my assignments and everyday needs because I need to gather a lot of information and reference books to get ideas.

Multiple issues: unnecessary infinitive 'to' after 'usually' (sentence structure), singular/plural mismatches ('book' vs 'books', 'assignment' vs 'assignments'), and awkward verbs ('share' should be 'find' or 'use the library to find'). Also 'receive too much information' is unnatural; use 'gather a lot of information'. Revised to consistent present tense and correct plural forms.

× For example, last week I got some psychology books to.

✓ For example, last week I got some psychology books.

Ending 'to' is extraneous and should be removed. Keep plural 'books' to agree with 'some'.

× Yes, I did because I haven't had not the computers in my kids period.

✓ Yes, I did because we didn't have computers when I was a child.

Incorrect tense and double negation: 'haven't had not' is wrong. Use simple past 'didn't have' for past fact. 'in my kids period' is ungrammatical; use 'when I was a child'.

× So I need to go to the library to, uh, do some assignments.

✓ So I had to go to the library to do some assignments.

Tense mismatch: when talking about the past ('did' earlier), use past modal 'had to' instead of present 'need to'. Remove filler 'uh' in written correction.

× Uh, for example, in my primary school period, I need to go, went to the library, uh, to uh, find, uh, research.

✓ For example, in primary school I went to the library to do research.

Mixed tenses and redundant words: use simple past 'went' for past actions. Remove filler 'uh' and awkward phrasing 'find research'; use 'do research'.

× Yes, uh, they dudes, they always, uh, they always go to libraries, uh, for example, because they also need to, uh, finish their homework, uh, in the Internet.

✓ Yes, they usually always go to libraries because they need to finish their homework online.

Irrelevant word 'dudes' and repetitive pronouns create confusion. 'In the Internet' is incorrect preposition use; use 'online' or 'on the Internet'. Simplify to clear subject 'they' and remove fillers.

× But some poor people do not have uh, for example, uh, in, uh, daily the most of the people also go to library to finish their homework.

✓ However, some poor people do not have access to the Internet or resources, so many people still go to the library to finish their homework.

Original sentence is fragmented and ungrammatical. Clarify meaning: express lack of access to Internet/resources and state that many people go to libraries. Use 'go to the library' or 'go to libraries' consistently and include 'access' to express lack of resources.