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Part 1

Giám khảo

Do you often go to the library?

Thí sinh

Uh, no, I usually I, I like to stay, uh, at home because, uh, it would make it is very comfortable and I think I can manage time, uh, more spider and so, uh, I like, uh, I prefer.

Giám khảo

What do you usually do in the library?

Thí sinh

Umm, I would usually I would uh study at the uh library in the library because it is have a quiet environment and I can fo focus in my mind. Uh, yes, but usually I don't go to library.

Giám khảo

Did you go to the library when you were a kid?

Thí sinh

Yes, uh, my, I would go to library with my parents when I was a kid, uh, they asked me read some, uh, books, uh, which I'm interested in, uh, in the, in the library.

Giám khảo

Do Chinese kids often go to the library?

Thí sinh

Uh, it is really hard to say because I don't, uh, do any investigation for that. I think it is needs, uh, it needs send some, you know, questionnaire to the, to the people, uh, in the streets to investigate the.

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Part 1

Do you often go to the library?

Điểm: 40.0

Gợi ý: 简短回答要直接并清晰说明立场,减少重复和填充词。用一到两句给出理由并用连接词衔接,避免语法错误和不连贯的表达。可以先说“不经常去”,然后说明主要原因(例如在家更舒适、更容易安排学习时间),并举一两个具体例子。

Ví dụ: I don't often go to the library. I prefer to study at home because it's more comfortable and allows me to organize my time better; for example, I can take short breaks and use my own desk and materials.

What do you usually do in the library?

Điểm: 48.0

Gợi ý: 回答要先直接回答问题,然后用一到两句解释具体活动和原因,使用连词使句子流畅。避免重复“library”和填充词,注意语法(主谓一致、动词形式),并给出具体细节如学习什么或使用哪些资料。

Ví dụ: When I'm at the library, I usually study quietly, focusing on reading textbooks and taking notes because the peaceful atmosphere helps me concentrate. For instance, I often use reference books and my laptop to complete assignments.

Did you go to the library when you were a kid?

Điểm: 60.0

Gợi ý: 回答要简洁且有条理。先肯定回答“是”,然后说明频率、陪伴者和具体活动,使用适当的时态和更自然的表达。可以补充一个具体例子或书名增强可信度。

Ví dụ: Yes, I went to the library with my parents when I was a child. They encouraged me to read picture books and stories I liked, such as fairy tales, and I often borrowed two or three books each visit.

Do Chinese kids often go to the library?

Điểm: 50.0

Gợi ý: 回答此类泛泛问题时,应先给出自己的观点(例如不确定但有观察),然后用一到两句给出理由或例子来支持观点。避免说“没有调查”作为唯一回答,改为分享个人观察或常见情况,并使用连接词保持逻辑。

Ví dụ: I'm not entirely sure, but from my experience it varies: children in cities often visit libraries because of nearby facilities, while those in rural areas may go less frequently due to limited access. For example, school library programs in larger cities encourage regular visits.

Ngữ pháp

Sentence structure errors

× Uh, no, I usually I, I like to stay, uh, at home because, uh, it would make it is very comfortable and I think I can manage time, uh, more spider and so, uh, I like, uh, I prefer.

No, I usually like to stay at home because it is very comfortable and I think I can manage my time better, so I prefer that.

句子结构混乱、重复和词序错误。原句中有重复("I usually I, I")、多余助动词("it would make it is")以及不正确的短语("manage time more spider")。建议:去掉重复部分,使用简单句并保持主谓一致;使用正确短语如 "manage my time better" 表达更好地管理时间。

Present tense issue

× Umm, I would usually I would uh study at the uh library in the library because it is have a quiet environment and I can fo focus in my mind. Uh, yes, but usually I don't go to library.

I usually study at the library because it has a quiet environment and I can focus. But usually I don't go to the library now.

时态和动词形式错误(present tense issue)。原句中使用了不必要的条件式 "would",并且动词形式错误("it is have" 应为 "it has"),以及不完整或冗余的短语("focus in my mind")。建议:使用一般现在时描述习惯行为;将 "have" 改为第三人称单数形式 "has";简化为 "focus" 或 "focus my mind"。

Past tense issue

× Yes, uh, my, I would go to library with my parents when I was a kid, uh, they asked me read some, uh, books, uh, which I'm interested in, uh, in the, in the library.

Yes, I went to the library with my parents when I was a kid; they asked me to read some books that I was interested in at the library.

过去时使用不当(Past tense issue)。口语中用了条件/习惯式 "would" 但描述具体过去事件应使用一般过去时 "went";另外缺少不定式标记 "to"("asked me to read"),以及定语从句时态应与过去一致("that I was interested in")。建议:描述过去经历时使用一般过去时,注意不定式和从句时态一致。

Modal verb usage

× Uh, it is really hard to say because I don't, uh, do any investigation for that. I think it is needs, uh, it needs send some, you know, questionnaire to the, to the people, uh, in the streets to investigate the.

It is really hard to say because I haven't done any investigation. I think it needs to send some questionnaires to people on the street to investigate.

情态/动词结构使用错误(Modal verb usage)。原句中 "do any investigation for that" 不自然,应为 "haven't done any investigation";"it is needs" 语法错误,应为 "it needs" 或更自然的被动/不定式结构。"send some questionnaire" 需要复数及不定式 "to send some questionnaires" 或被动语态。建议:使用完成时表达未做过的行动;将动词和主语搭配正确,问卷用复数并注意介词搭配("people on the street")。

Từ vựng trọng tâm

ComfortablePleasant; Cozy; Loose; Leisurely
HardFirm; Arduous; Difficult; Harsh; Strict
InterestedAttentive; Concerned; Partisan
QuietSilent; Soft; Peaceful; Unobtrusive
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