Library— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more direct and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence stating whether you go often now, then give one or two specific reasons or examples. Avoid repetition and filler words. Use linking words (however, although, but) correctly to show contrast between past and present.

Ví dụ: I used to visit the school library often when I was in high school, but I rarely go now because I graduated and I read more on online apps. However, if I need a quiet place to study or want physical books, I still visit the library occasionally.

Gợi ý: Give a clear main idea and then one or two specific details. Reduce hesitations and avoid repeating the same phrases. Use a linking word to add a reason (because/so) and mention a concrete example (type of books or length of time).

Ví dụ: When I visit the library I usually read for an hour or two because the atmosphere is peaceful. For example, I often sit with a cup of coffee and read novels or textbooks to concentrate better.

Gợi ý: Answer directly with a single clear sentence about your childhood habit, then give one specific supporting detail (what you did or why you liked it). Avoid long, repeated phrases and correct basic grammar (subject-verb, articles).

Ví dụ: As a child I did not have access to many libraries, but later I discovered more and began visiting them regularly. I went there not just to read but to enjoy the calm environment and study quietly.

Gợi ý: Avoid saying you don't know in a way that sounds dismissive. If you truly don't know, say so briefly and then offer a related example or comparison about your own country. Keep it concise and respectful, and use linking words (however, but) to shift to your example.

Ví dụ: I'm not sure about Chinese children, as I don't have information about them. However, in Nepal many children do visit libraries because they enjoy the quiet atmosphere and want to improve their reading and vocabulary.

× Or in the high school era, I remember they used to have a library so I often visit there.

✓ In high school, I remember they used to have a library, so I often visited there.

The speaker refers to a past period ('high school era' and 'used to have'), so the main verb should be in the past tense. Change 'visit' to 'visited' to match past time reference and ensure tense consistency. Also simplify 'Or in the high school era' to 'In high school' for natural phrasing.

× But now when I'm like. But now I have recently come with my graduate in high school so I don't visit often to the library.

✓ But now I recently graduated from high school, so I don't visit the library often.

The phrase 'have recently come with my graduate in high school' is ungrammatical. Use 'recently graduated from high school' (present perfect 'have graduated' or simple past 'graduated' are both acceptable; 'recently graduated' is natural). Also remove unnecessary 'to' after 'visit' and put 'often' after the verb. Tense and word order corrected.

× But if I have to read or I like reading books like that I often see in the online apps and I used to go to the library in portions.

✓ But if I need to read or I like reading, I often use online apps and I used to go to the library sometimes.

'Have to read' is fine but 'I have to' better as 'I need to' for clarity; 'reading books like that' is vague so shorten to 'reading.' 'See in the online apps' is incorrect; use 'use online apps.' 'In portions' is unnatural; use 'sometimes.' Maintain tense: 'used to go' indicates past habit, keep if intended.

× I, when I visit library, I try to read books, uh, like as much as I can because the, uh, environment is very peaceful over there as compared to your homes.

✓ When I visit the library, I try to read books as much as I can because the environment there is much more peaceful than at home.

'Visit library' needs the definite article 'the library.' Remove redundant pronoun 'I' at start. Use 'as much as I can' without extra fillers. 'Over there as compared to your homes' is awkward; use 'there is much more peaceful than at home' for clear comparison and correct article usage ('the environment').

× So I try to read the book, read the books, umm, by sitting over there having coffee, coffee, cup of coffee, umm, to uh, increase my reading.

✓ So I try to read books there while having a cup of coffee to improve my reading.

Use plural 'books' for general activity. 'Sitting over there having coffee, coffee, cup of coffee' is repetitive; simplify to 'while having a cup of coffee.' 'Increase my reading' is unnatural; use 'improve my reading.' Article 'a cup of coffee' required.

× I remember when I was a kid they didn't used to be have much library, but as I as I grew up I got to know there was a lot the the library exist and I used to visit not just only for reading books but also to enjoy that peaceful environment that only happened in our library.

✓ I remember when I was a kid they didn't use to have many libraries, but as I grew up I learned that many libraries existed, and I used to visit not only to read books but also to enjoy the peaceful environment of our library.

Use 'didn't use to' (not 'didn't used to be have') and plural 'many libraries.' 'Got to know' is better as 'learned.' 'There was a lot the the library exist' is ungrammatical; change to 'many libraries existed.' Use 'not only to read' rather than 'not just only for reading.' 'That only happened in our library' should be 'the peaceful environment of our library.' Maintain past tense consistency.

× I don't know about Chinese kid because I haven't read anything about them.

✓ I don't know about Chinese kids because I haven't read anything about them.

Singular 'kid' should be plural 'kids' to match generalization. 'I haven't read anything about them' is acceptable, but ensure pronoun 'them' refers to 'Chinese kids'.

× I am not interested in Chinese people all but talking about the Nepalese.

✓ I'm not generally interested in Chinese people, but speaking about Nepalese people,

Phrase 'not interested in Chinese people all' is incorrect; use 'not generally interested in Chinese people.' Also 'talking about the Nepalese' needs clearer phrasing; use 'speaking about Nepalese people.' Maintain natural connectors.

× I think most of the people are quite interested in going to the library, often uh, because they really like the umm, atmospheres, umm, quite atmospheres and uh, just to improve their vocabulary as well as the reading.

✓ I think most people are quite interested in going to the library often because they like the quiet atmosphere and want to improve their vocabulary and reading skills.

Remove 'the' before 'people' in general statements ('most people'). 'Often' should follow the verb phrase. 'Atmospheres' is incorrect; use singular 'atmosphere' with adjective 'quiet.' 'Just to improve their vocabulary as well as the reading' should be 'to improve their vocabulary and reading skills.' Maintain plural 'skills' for natural English.