Library— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be direct, grammatical and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid filler words (umm, you see) and correct verb forms and articles (e.g., "I don't visit the library often").

Ví dụ: I don't visit the library often. I usually go once a week because my friends invite me to study there, and we use the quiet space to work on assignments together.

Gợi ý: Give a clear topic sentence about your typical activities, then add specific details and use linking words to connect ideas. Correct grammar (e.g., "do my tasks" "with my friends") and clarify why you use online resources instead of physical books.

Ví dụ: I usually do assignments and study with my friends in the library. Because many books are available online, I often research articles and download materials rather than borrowing physical books.

Gợi ý: Answer directly and use past tense consistently. Provide one specific supporting detail and a linking word. Reduce hesitation and repetition. For example, explain the school routine that led you to go there weekly.

Ví dụ: Yes, I used to go to the library once a week when I was in secondary school because the school scheduled regular library sessions and took all students there to read and do research.

Gợi ý: Avoid overgeneralizations and vague language. Start with a clear opinion, then support it with one or two specific reasons or examples. Use neutral, accurate vocabulary (e.g., "many Chinese parents encourage reading") and avoid stereotypes.

Ví dụ: I think many Chinese children do visit libraries fairly often because parents and schools encourage reading as part of education. For instance, schools often organize reading activities and parents may take their children to the library on weekends.

× I myself not really visit the library more often, but umm, I visit there only like 1 times per week because my friends call me to sitting there.

✓ I don't really visit the library often; I go only about once per week because my friends invite me to sit there.

The original uses incorrect reflexive pronoun 'myself' and wrong verb forms ('not really visit', '1 times', 'call me to sitting'). This is a sentence structure and subject-verb agreement issue. Use 'I don't' for negative auxiliary, 'often' for frequency adverb, 'once' (singular) with 'per week', and 'invite me to sit' or 'ask me to sit' for correct verb patterns. Suggestions: use auxiliary verbs for negation, correct singular/plural forms, and correct verb patterns after 'invite'.

× So that that was the time that I, you see, visit myself. We'll see me in.

✓ That was the time when I visited. You could see me there.

The sentence uses wrong pronouns and reflexive 'visit myself' incorrectly, and mixes tenses. Replace 'visit myself' with 'visited' (past simple) and use 'there' rather than 'in'. Also separate ideas into two clear sentences. Suggestions: avoid reflexive pronouns unless the subject performs the action on themselves; match tense to the context (past).

× I usually like do my task do my assignment with my friend theirs.

✓ I usually do my tasks and assignments with my friend.

Problems: missing auxiliary 'do' placement and wrong possessive 'theirs'. Also 'task' and 'assignment' need plural or coordinate form. Use 'do my tasks and assignments' and 'my friend' (singular) for clarity. Suggestions: use parallel structure for nouns and correct possessive adjectives.

× I don't think that I read a book from the library because most of the book that I read I find it online or on the Google and I read only I do research.

✓ I don't usually borrow books from the library because most of the books I read I find online or on Google; I mainly do research there.

Errors include article and number agreement ('book' vs 'books'), unnecessary pronoun 'it', and awkward phrasing 'on the Google'. Also tense/aspect consistency. Use 'usually' for habitual, plural 'books', 'find online' or 'on Google', and simplify final clause. Suggestions: keep noun number consistent and avoid unnecessary pronouns; use standard collocations like 'find online' and 'on Google'.

× Yes, umm, I remember that I go, I went to library like umm, once it one per week because umm, during my secondary school they, they have a time for library so they uh, take all the kids to uh, to the library.

✓ Yes, I remember that I went to the library about once a week because during secondary school they had a library period and took all the kids to the library.

Mixed tenses and article errors: 'I go, I went' is inconsistent; use past simple 'went' and 'had' for past habit. 'to library' needs the article 'the', and 'once it one per week' is incorrect number expression; use 'about once a week' or 'once a week'. Suggestions: maintain past tense for past events, use 'the library', and use natural frequency expressions.

× Uh, I definitely think that, uh, more majorities of kids in China, they more often, uh, visit library because, you know, the, uh, the Asians or Chinese parent, they really restrict and they need their children to read a lot of book in the library.

✓ I definitely think that the majority of kids in China visit the library more often because Chinese parents are strict and want their children to read a lot of books in the library.

Errors: 'more majorities' is wrong; use 'the majority' or 'most'. 'Visit library' needs 'the library'. 'the Asians or Chinese parent' is ungrammatical and plural agreement errors: use 'Chinese parents' and 'want' instead of 'need'. 'a lot of book' should be 'a lot of books'. Suggestions: use 'the majority' or 'most', ensure noun plurality, and use consistent subject-verb agreement.

× So it definitely they go.

✓ So they definitely go.

Original has misplaced subject 'it' causing subject-verb agreement error. Remove 'it' and place adverb correctly: 'They definitely go.' Suggestions: keep subject and verb together and place adverbs in a natural position (before main verb or after auxiliary).