Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you often go to the library?
Thí sinh
Of course that's because there is a very modern and excellent library near my house by the underground is usually take like 10 minutes to get there and there are many stores of books I can borrow and I always go there with my parents.
Giám khảo
What do you usually do in the library?
Thí sinh
Well, I usually spend up to two hours, uh, to read the books. I haven't read it before or, uh, study with my friends in a public place that many students study here. The atmosphere of study is very good and the facility is well developed.
Giám khảo
Did you go to the library when you were a kid?
Thí sinh
Absolutely. A library is one of my favorite places I like to spend in time. When I was a child, uh, I can borrow a book here or reading book with my friends, uh, borrow a book to home, back to home and share with my friends, bring it together. Yeah.
Giám khảo
Do Chinese kids often go to the library?
Thí sinh
Of course, I think many Chinese kids like to spending time in the library, study or reading book with their friends or alone. Most of them Chinese students like spending time in the library and doing homework together.
Do you often go to the library?
Điểm: 68.0Gợi ý: 回答要更直接并注意句子结构与时态,避免重复与语法错误。可以先给出简短明确的主题句(频率与原因),然后用一两句具体细节支持(交通时间、设施、陪伴的人)。注意冠词、动词形式和介词使用。
Ví dụ: Yes, I often go to the library because there is a modern one near my house. It only takes about ten minutes by subway, and it has a large collection of books. I usually go there with my parents on weekends.
What do you usually do in the library?
Điểm: 64.0Gợi ý: 回答要条理清楚,先给出主要活动,然后用连接词展开细节。注意时态和搭配(e.g., 'spend two hours reading'),避免模糊或不完整的句子。可提及具体书籍类型或学习内容以增加信息量。
Ví dụ: I usually spend about two hours at the library, mainly reading novels and studying for exams. Also, I sometimes meet friends there to work on group projects because the study atmosphere is quiet and the facilities are excellent.
Did you go to the library when you were a kid?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 回答要使用正确的过去时并组织成2–3句:先回答是否去过,再描述童年时的具体活动与感受。避免重复表达,相同意思只需一句明确描述。
Ví dụ: Yes, I went to the library often as a child because I loved reading. I used to borrow picture books and comics, then take them home to share and read with my friends.
Do Chinese kids often go to the library?
Điểm: 66.0Gợi ý: 回答要更精确并使用一般现在时,避免重复。可以给出一个简短总体评价并用具体例子或原因支持(如课外辅导、学校习惯)。注意主谓一致与词形(e.g., 'like to spend')。
Ví dụ: Yes, many Chinese children do go to libraries regularly. They often study there after school or read books with friends because libraries provide a quiet place and helpful resources for homework.
× Of course that's because there is a very modern and excellent library near my house by the underground is usually take like 10 minutes to get there and there are many stores of books I can borrow and I always go there with my parents.
✓ Of course. That's because there is a very modern and excellent library near my house. By underground it usually takes about 10 minutes to get there. There are many shelves of books I can borrow, and I always go there with my parents.
句子冗长且结构混乱,包含多个独立子句但没有适当的连接或标点,动词形式不正确('is usually take' 应为 'it usually takes'),名词搭配不当('stores of books' 应为 'shelves of books')。建议把长句拆成几个短句,注意主语与动词一致并使用恰当的名词搭配。
× Well, I usually spend up to two hours, uh, to read the books.
✓ Well, I usually spend up to two hours reading books.
使用动词短语 'spend' 后应接动名词(-ing)而不是不定式 'to read'。因此应改为 'spend ... reading'。建议熟记 'spend + 时间 + doing' 结构。
× I haven't read it before or, uh, study with my friends in a public place that many students study here.
✓ I haven't read them before, or I study with my friends in a public place where many students study.
原句中代词 'it' 与复数 'books' 不一致,应使用 'them';从句连接和关系代词使用不当,'that many students study here' 应改为 'where many students study'。建议注意代词数一致及使用关系副词 where 引导地点从句。
× The atmosphere of study is very good and the facility is well developed.
✓ The study atmosphere is very good and the facilities are well developed.
名词搭配和单复数错误:'atmosphere of study' 更自然为 'study atmosphere',表示设施时用复数 'facilities';'well developed' 可用,但搭配复数形式更清晰。建议注意固定搭配和名词单复数。
× Absolutely. A library is one of my favorite places I like to spend in time.
✓ Absolutely. A library is one of my favorite places where I like to spend my time.
句子缺少连接词和介词短语不当:应使用关系副词 'where' 引导定语从句,并把 'spend in time' 改为正确短语 'spend my time'。建议学习 'places where ...' 结构和固定动词短语 'spend time'。
× When I was a child, uh, I can borrow a book here or reading book with my friends, uh, borrow a book to home, back to home and share with my friends, bring it together.
✓ When I was a child, I could borrow a book here or read books with my friends, take books home and share them with my friends.
描述过去的情境应使用过去时,'can' 应为过去式 'could';动词形式混用,应使用不定式或动词原形的并列形式(borrow → take, reading → read);代词一致性('books' 与 'them')。建议统一使用过去时并保持并列结构的动词形式一致。
× Do Chinese kids often go to the library? Student: Of course, I think many Chinese kids like to spending time in the library, study or reading book with their friends or alone.
✓ Of course. I think many Chinese kids like to spend time in the library, studying or reading books with their friends or alone.
'like to spending' 混用了不定式和动名词,应为 'like to spend' 或 'like spending';并列动词形式要一致,'study or reading' 应改为 'studying or reading' 或 'study or read';'book' 应为复数 'books'。建议注意动词形式一致和可数名词复数。
× Most of them Chinese students like spending time in the library and doing homework together.
✓ Most Chinese students like spending time in the library and doing homework together.
'Most of them Chinese students' 结构错误,正确说法为 'Most Chinese students',在 'most' 后若跟名词短语通常不加 'of them'。建议使用常见表达 'most + 名词' 或 'most of the + 名词'。