Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you often go to the library?
Thí sinh
Uh, not really, Uh. I often go to library uh because I study a lot, uh.
Giám khảo
What do you usually do in the library?
Thí sinh
Mastery I I I do study. Uh. Study because I I love study.
Giám khảo
Did you go to the library when you were a kid?
Thí sinh
I almost, uh, never go to library because I hate there. There's are so many people and boring.
Giám khảo
Do Chinese kids often go to the library?
Thí sinh
I don't have idea. I don't have idea. I don't ******* know Chinese kids. I hate Chinese.
Do you often go to the library?
Điểm: 40.0Gợi ý: 自然で簡潔な答え方を練習しましょう。まず直接の回答(Yes/No)で始め、その後に理由を一文で述べます。曖昧なフィラー(uh, um)を減らし、冠詞や語順に注意してください。例えば「I don't go often. I only go when I need to study for exams.」のように短く明確に話す練習をしてください。
Ví dụ: No, I don't go very often. I usually visit the library only when I need a quiet place to revise for exams.
What do you usually do in the library?
Điểm: 30.0Gợi ý: 答えは直接的だが冗長で繰り返しが多いです。トピック文で活動を述べ、次に具体的な詳細(何を、どのように、どの頻度で)をつけ加えましょう。接続詞を使って論理的に繋げる練習をしてください。また発音と文法(動詞形の繰返し回避)に注意してください。
Ví dụ: I usually study in the library. For example, I review lecture notes and complete practice exercises there because it's quieter than home.
Did you go to the library when you were a kid?
Điểm: 35.0Gợi ý: 過去形で明確に答え、理由を自然な表現で述べる必要があります。否定表現は“almost never”などで正しく使い、場所の言い方や形容詞の使い方(boringではなく it was boring / I found it boring)を直しましょう。文を2文以内にまとめ、語順と冠詞に注意してください。
Ví dụ: I almost never went to the library as a child because I found it boring and usually too crowded for me.
Do Chinese kids often go to the library?
Điểm: 5.0Gợi ý: この質問への答えは不適切で失礼です。文化や人々を一般化して批判するのは避けてください。知らなければ正直に言い、推測するなら控えめな表現(I’m not sure, but...)を使い、可能なら一般的な傾向や自分の経験に基づく説明を付け加えましょう。例として丁寧で中立的な返答を練習してください。
Ví dụ: I'm not sure about all Chinese children, but from what I know, many Chinese students do visit libraries regularly, especially when preparing for exams.
× I often go to library uh because I study a lot, uh.
✓ I often go to the library because I study a lot.
The noun 'library' here is a singular, countable noun and requires the definite article 'the' because the speaker and listener understand which library is meant; also filler 'uh' removed for clarity. Suggestion: use 'the library' when referring to a specific known place and avoid unnecessary fillers. Grammar problem type's ID:22
× Mastery I I I do study. Uh. Study because I I love study.
✓ Mostly, I study. I study because I love studying.
'Mastery' is likely a misused word; the intended adverb is 'mostly'. Repetition and fragmented sentences reduce clarity. Also 'love study' is incorrect: 'study' as a verb requires the -ing form ('studying') after 'love'. Suggestion: use 'mostly' to indicate frequency and use gerund after 'love'. Grammar problem type's ID:26
× I almost, uh, never go to library because I hate there.
✓ I almost never went to the library because I hated being there.
The question asked about childhood ('when you were a kid'), so past tense should be used: 'went' and 'hated'. 'Library' needs the definite article 'the' and the phrase 'hate there' is ungrammatical; use 'hated being there' or 'hated it there'. Suggestion: match tense to the time reference and use natural verb patterns like 'hated being there'. Grammar problem type's ID:5
× I almost, uh, never go to library because I hate there. There's are so many people and boring.
✓ I almost never went to the library because I hated being there. There were so many people and it was boring.
Multiple issues: 'library' needs 'the' (article error), tense should be past ('went', 'hated'), 'There's are' is ungrammatical and should be 'There were' for past plural, and 'boring' needs a subject ('it was boring') or use 'and it was boring'. Suggestion: correct articles, use past tense consistently, and provide a proper subject for 'boring'. Grammar problem type's ID:22
× I don't have idea. I don't have idea. I don't ******* know Chinese kids. I hate Chinese.
✓ I don't have an idea. I don't really know many Chinese kids. I don't hate Chinese people.
'Have idea' needs the indefinite article 'an' (article error but realized as pronoun/phrase issue). More importantly, 'I don't ******* know Chinese kids' is unclear; likely intended 'I don't really know Chinese kids' or 'I don't know many Chinese kids'. Also 'I hate Chinese' is ungrammatical and offensive; to refer to people use 'Chinese people' and avoid strong statements—if intended to say 'I don't like Chinese (things)', specify. Suggestion: use 'an idea', 'I don't know many Chinese kids' for clarity, and avoid broad negative statements about a nationality; say 'I don't know them well' or 'I don't like Chinese food' if relevant. Grammar problem type's ID:12