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Part 1

Giám khảo

Do you often go to the library?

Thí sinh

Yes, I often go to the library and visiting the library once or twice a week.

Giám khảo

What do you usually do in the library?

Thí sinh

In the library, I usually borrow books for my courses on a study. I have a routine every Wednesday in the library to do my assessments from my course.

Giám khảo

Did you go to the library when you were a kid?

Thí sinh

No, when I was a kid and I never visit a library because my town, it's a little town and in that season it hasn't it hadn't a library.

Giám khảo

Do Chinese kids often go to the library?

Thí sinh

I think China is a country top ten in everything. I consider the kids from early in their years visit the library often.

Đánh giá

Tổng

Tổng: 6.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 6.0Phát âm: 6.0Ngữ pháp: 5.5Từ vựng: 6.0

Part 1

Do you often go to the library?

Điểm: 60.0

Gợi ý: Be concise and grammatically correct. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid repetition, and correct verb forms. For example, say how often and why briefly. Keep it under five sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes, I often go to the library about once or twice a week because I prefer a quiet place to study. I usually go in the evenings when it is less crowded, and I borrow reference books for my courses.

What do you usually do in the library?

Điểm: 70.0

Gợi ý: Organize your response with a clear topic sentence followed by specific supporting details connected with linking words. Use correct prepositions and natural collocations (e.g., "borrow books for my courses", "work on assignments").

Ví dụ: I usually borrow textbooks and reference books for my courses and use the library to study. For example, every Wednesday I reserve a study table to work on my assignments and review lecture notes.

Did you go to the library when you were a kid?

Điểm: 55.0

Gợi ý: Give a direct, grammatically correct answer and support it with clear reasons using linking words. Fix tense and sentence structure errors and avoid unnecessary fillers.

Ví dụ: No, I didn’t go to a library as a child because my hometown was very small and didn’t have one. As a result, I only started visiting libraries after I moved to the city for school.

Do Chinese kids often go to the library?

Điểm: 50.0

Gợi ý: Answer the question directly and avoid vague or exaggerated statements. Use linking words to qualify your opinion and provide a specific example or reason. Correct grammar and word order (e.g., "children visit libraries from an early age").

Ví dụ: Many Chinese children do visit libraries from an early age because schools encourage reading and there are public libraries in larger cities. However, attendance varies between urban and rural areas, where access to libraries can be limited.

Ngữ pháp

Verb + -ing form

× Yes, I often go to the library and visiting the library once or twice a week.

Yes, I often go to the library and visit the library once or twice a week.

The sentence mixes a base verb form (go) with a gerund (visiting) joined by 'and'. When two verbs share the same subject and are connected by 'and', they should be in the same form. Use the base form 'visit' to match 'go'. To improve, keep parallel verb forms: 'I often go and visit...' or just 'I often visit...'.

Article errors

× In the library, I usually borrow books for my courses on a study.

In the library, I usually borrow books for my courses to study.

The phrase 'on a study' is ungrammatical. The intended meaning is likely purpose: 'to study' or 'for studying'. Use 'to study' to indicate purpose. Also 'courses' does not require an article here.

Verb + -ing form

× I have a routine every Wednesday in the library to do my assessments from my course.

I have a routine every Wednesday in the library to do my assessments for my courses.

'From my course' is an incorrect prepositional choice; use 'for my courses' to indicate the assessments belong to those courses. This also fixes number agreement if the student has multiple courses. The structure 'to do my assessments' is acceptable; ensure the preposition properly links the assessments to the courses.

Sentence structure errors

× No, when I was a kid and I never visit a library because my town, it's a little town and in that season it hasn't it hadn't a library.

No, when I was a kid I never visited a library because my town was small and at that time it did not have a library.

This sentence has multiple structure and tense errors: 'when I was a kid and I never visit' mixes past and present and has an unnecessary 'and'. Use past tense 'visited' to match 'was a kid'. 'It's a little town' should be past 'was small' to match timeframe. 'in that season' is an odd phrase; 'at that time' is natural. 'it hasn't it hadn't a library' is ungrammatical; use 'did not have a library' for past possession. To improve, keep consistent past tense and remove extra conjunctions.

Present tense issue

× I think China is a country top ten in everything.

I think China is among the top ten countries in many areas.

The original phrase 'a country top ten in everything' is ungrammatical and vague. Use 'among the top ten countries' to express ranking and 'in many areas' rather than 'in everything' which is exaggerated and awkward. This corrects noun phrase order and improves clarity.

Verb + -ing form

× I consider the kids from early in their years visit the library often.

I think children from an early age visit the library often.

'Consider' followed by a clause requires careful structure; 'I consider the kids from early in their years visit...' is incorrect. Use 'I think' or restructure: 'I consider that children from an early age visit...'. Also 'from early in their years' is awkward; 'from an early age' is idiomatic. 'Visit' should be in present simple 'visit' to express habitual action. To improve, use natural collocations and correct clause structure.

Từ vựng trọng tâm

EarlyAdvance; Primitive; Prompt
LittleShort; Young; Brief; Minor
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