Shoes— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和拼写错误，如'impensive'应为'expensive'，且表达不够连贯。建议使用更自然的表达方式，避免重复和不完整的句子，并且补充第二个原因。

Ví dụ: I don't buy shoes very often, usually only two or three times a year. This is mainly because shoes are more expensive than other clothes like shirts or pants, and also because I prefer to save money for other things.

Gợi ý: 回答中有语法和表达不自然的问题，如'put shoes online'应为'bought shoes online'。建议使用更准确的词汇，减少口头语，并用连接词使句子更连贯。

Ví dụ: Yes, I have bought shoes online because online shopping is usually cheaper than buying in malls. Moreover, there are more options to choose from, which makes it easier to find the right pair.

Gợi ý: 回答中表达不清晰且有语法错误，如'good equality'应为'good quality'。建议直接回答问题，避免重复和不确定的表达，并用具体例子说明。

Ví dụ: I usually spend different amounts on shoes depending on the situation. If I really like a pair or they have good quality, I am willing to pay more. But for regular shoes, I prefer to buy affordable ones.

Gợi ý: 回答中有语法错误和表达不自然，如'important scheme'应为'important occasions'。建议使用更准确的词汇，避免重复口头语，并用连接词使句子更流畅。

Ví dụ: I prefer both fashionable and comfortable shoes. Fashionable shoes are suitable for important occasions like birthdays or parties, while comfortable shoes are better for daily activities such as work or traveling.

× I sometimes buy shoes just only two or three times a year.

✓ I sometimes buy shoes only two or three times a year.

句中“just only”重复表达了“仅仅”的意思，属于冗余，应去掉“just”或“only”之一。

× Firstly because the shoes are impensive than other costumes like shirts or pants, and the second.

✓ Firstly, because the shoes are more expensive than other clothes like shirts or pants, and secondly.

单词拼写错误，“impensive”应为“expensive”；“costumes”用词不当，应为“clothes”；比较级缺少“more”；连接词“second”应为“secondly”。

× I always put shoes online umm for the simple reason is that umm online shopping is much cheaper than in the shopping mall.

✓ I always buy shoes online, umm, for the simple reason that online shopping is much cheaper than shopping in the mall.

“put shoes online”表达不当，应为“buy shoes online”；“than in the shopping mall”应改为“than shopping in the mall”，介词使用错误。

× if the shoes which are my favorite or have a good equality, I will choose to spend more money on them instead.

✓ if the shoes are my favorite or have good quality, I will choose to spend more money on them instead.

“which are”多余，简化为“are”；“equality”拼写错误，应为“quality”。

× However, if it's a normal shoes, I would choose those.

✓ However, if they're normal shoes, I would choose those.

“a normal shoes”中“shoes”为复数，前面不应加不定冠词“a”，应改为“they're normal shoes”。

× Firstly the fashion shoes is suitable for attending some important scheme like birthday or parties and however the comfortable shoes is suitable for daily life like working or traveling as well.

✓ Firstly, fashionable shoes are suitable for attending some important events like birthdays or parties; however, comfortable shoes are suitable for daily life like working or traveling as well.

“fashion shoes”应为复数“fashionable shoes”，“is”应改为“are”；“scheme”用词不当，应为“events”；“birthday”应为复数“birthdays”；“comfortable shoes is”应改为“comfortable shoes are”。