Shoes— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự tự nhiên và có lỗi ngữ pháp, ví dụ như 'at at' và cấu trúc câu chưa rõ ràng. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi với câu chủ đề rõ ràng, tránh lặp từ và sử dụng cấu trúc ngữ pháp chính xác hơn.

Ví dụ: No, I don't like buying shoes very often because I already have many pairs at home, and shoes can be quite expensive.

Gợi ý: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, khiến ý nghĩa khó hiểu. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng câu đơn giản và rõ ràng, tránh lặp từ và thêm chi tiết cụ thể để làm rõ câu trả lời.

Ví dụ: Yes, I have bought shoes online. I think the first time was when I was about 8 years old, and it was a bit challenging because I was new to online shopping.

Gợi ý: Bạn nên tránh lặp từ như 'prefer prefer' và cấu trúc câu nên rõ ràng hơn. Hãy trả lời trực tiếp với câu chủ đề, sau đó giải thích lý do một cách mạch lạc và sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp.

Ví dụ: I usually don't spend much money on shoes because I already have many pairs. Also, shoes can be expensive, so I prefer to save money for other important things.

Gợi ý: Câu trả lời của bạn khá tốt nhưng có thể cải thiện bằng cách sử dụng liên từ để câu văn mạch lạc hơn và tránh các câu ngắt quãng như 'so I'm not.' Hãy làm rõ ý và sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp hơn.

Ví dụ: I prefer comfortable shoes rather than fashionable ones because, as a high school senior, I don't focus much on fashion. Comfortable shoes are more practical for me.

× Absolutely not because at at my house have a lot of shoes so I don't really keen on shopping to buy shoes and of course shoes cost expensive so.

✓ Absolutely not because at my house, I have a lot of shoes, so I'm not really keen on shopping to buy shoes, and of course, shoes are expensive.

The phrase 'at at my house have a lot of shoes' is incorrect because it lacks a subject and verb agreement and misuses the preposition 'at'. The correct form is 'at my house, I have a lot of shoes'. Also, 'shoes cost expensive' is incorrect; it should be 'shoes are expensive' because 'cost' is a verb and 'expensive' is an adjective, so 'are' links the subject to the adjective.

× Absolutely yes. That was the first time I access to the shopping from my mind that maybe I was 8 years old and that was a big problem.

✓ Absolutely yes. That was the first time I accessed shopping; from my memory, I was maybe 8 years old, and that was a big problem.

The phrase 'I access to the shopping' is incorrect because 'access' is a verb that does not require 'to' in this context and is not used with 'shopping' as a noun here. The correct verb form is 'accessed shopping' or better 'accessed the shopping site'. Also, 'from my mind' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'from my memory'.

× I definitely think that I don't spend much money on shoes because I already have a lot of pairs at home and so can be quite expensive, so I prefer prefer to save my money for the other necessary things. So yeah.

✓ I definitely think that I don't spend much money on shoes because I already have a lot of pairs at home, and shoes can be quite expensive, so I prefer to save my money for other necessary things. So yeah.

The phrase 'and so can be quite expensive' is missing the subject 'shoes'. It should be 'and shoes can be quite expensive'. Also, the repetition 'prefer prefer' is a typo and should be corrected to 'prefer'. The phrase 'for the other necessary things' should be 'for other necessary things' because 'other' is used without 'the' in this context.

× From my perspective, comfortable shoes may outweigh the fashionable shoe because now I'm a high school senior, so I'm not. I don't need fashionable shoes and I'm not a fashionista star, so the comfortable shoes may be the convenient choice.

✓ From my perspective, comfortable shoes may outweigh fashionable shoes because now I'm a high school senior, so I don't need fashionable shoes and I'm not a fashionista star, so comfortable shoes may be the convenient choice.

The phrase 'fashionable shoe' should be plural 'fashionable shoes' to match 'comfortable shoes' and maintain parallel structure. Also, 'the comfortable shoes' should be 'comfortable shoes' because it refers generally, not a specific pair.