Shoes— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Try to make your answer more structured by starting with a clear topic sentence and then adding specific details. Also, avoid vague expressions like "maybe" and use precise frequency adverbs. For example, say "I love buying shoes and I usually buy new ones every three to five months."

Ví dụ: Yes, I love buying shoes. I usually purchase new pairs every three to five months because I like to keep my collection updated.

Gợi ý: Your answer needs to be clearer and more coherent. Use linking words to connect ideas and avoid repetition. Also, try to be more specific about your experience. For example, say "Yes, I have bought shoes online. Sometimes the quality is good, but other times the size doesn't fit well, which depends on the website."

Ví dụ: Yes, I have bought shoes online. Sometimes the shoes fit perfectly and the quality is good, but other times the size is either too small or too big, which depends on the website I order from.

Gợi ý: Try to give a more direct and structured answer. Start with a clear statement about your spending habits, then provide specific amounts. Avoid informal phrases like "like" and use precise language. For example, "I usually don't spend much on shoes because I am saving money. The last time I bought shoes, I spent around $100 to $150."

Ví dụ: I usually don't spend much on shoes because I am saving money. The last time I bought a pair, it cost me about $100 to $150.

Gợi ý: Your answer is good but can be improved by using linking words to make it more coherent and by slightly expanding your explanation. For example, "I actually like both fashionable and comfortable shoes. For instance, I prefer fashionable shoes for holidays and special occasions, whereas I choose comfortable shoes for work, study, and workouts."

Ví dụ: I actually like both fashionable and comfortable shoes. For example, I wear fashionable shoes during holidays and special occasions, but I prefer comfortable shoes when I am working, studying, or exercising.

× I do love buying shoes.

✓ I love buying shoes.

The use of 'do' for emphasis in 'I do love buying shoes' is grammatically correct but unnecessary in this context. Simply saying 'I love buying shoes' is more natural and appropriate for the present tense.

× So when I bought the last time was like $100 or 150.

✓ So when I bought shoes last time, it was like $100 or $150.

The original sentence lacks clarity and proper structure. Adding 'shoes' clarifies the object, and including 'it was' correctly links the amount spent. Also, adding the dollar sign before 150 improves clarity.

× I mean some of them are really good but the other time it came small, came big it it depends on on the website.

✓ I mean some of them are really good, but other times they come small or big; it depends on the website.

The original sentence has pronoun errors and redundancy. 'The other time' should be 'other times' to indicate frequency. 'It came' should be 'they come' to agree with 'some of them' (plural). Also, removing repeated words and adding punctuation improves clarity.