Shoes— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答が断片的で文法的に不自然な部分があります。より自然で効果的な英語表現を使い、文をつなげて一貫性を持たせることが重要です。例えば、"I don't buy shoes very often, but when I do, I choose comfortable and durable ones carefully."のように表現すると良いでしょう。

Ví dụ: I don't buy shoes very often, but when I do, I choose comfortable and durable ones carefully to ensure they last a long time.

Gợi ý: 文が途中で終わっており、意味が伝わりにくいです。経験を具体的に説明し、文を完結させることが必要です。例えば、"I bought shoes online once, but it was not a good experience because they were uncomfortable."のように述べると良いでしょう。

Ví dụ: Yes, I have bought shoes online before, but it was not a good experience because the shoes were uncomfortable when I received them.

Gợi ý: 言葉の詰まりや文法の誤りが多く、意味が不明瞭です。金額と理由を明確に述べ、流暢に話す練習が必要です。例えば、"I usually spend around $200 on shoes because I believe good shoes are worth the investment."のように表現しましょう。

Ví dụ: I usually spend around $200 on shoes because I believe good shoes are worth the investment and last longer.

Gợi ý: 内容は明確ですが、文法の誤り（例えば、"shoes tends"は"shoes tend"）や繰り返しが見られます。より自然な表現に改善し、文を簡潔にまとめると良いでしょう。

Ví dụ: I prefer comfortable shoes because they tend to be more durable and I can use them for a long time.

× I not.

✓ I don't.

The sentence 'I not.' is incomplete and lacks the auxiliary verb 'do' needed for negation in the present tense. The correct form is 'I don't.' which is a contraction of 'I do not.' This correction ensures the sentence has a proper verb structure.

× but when I buy it, I choose carefully and I choose comfortable and durable shoes.

✓ but when I buy them, I choose carefully and I choose comfortable and durable shoes.

The pronoun 'it' is singular, but 'shoes' is plural. Therefore, the correct pronoun to refer to 'shoes' is 'them' to maintain number agreement.

× Yes, I have bought shoes online before but it is not it was not good experience.

✓ Yes, I have bought shoes online before but it was not a good experience.

The sentence contains redundant and incorrect phrases 'it is not it was not'. The correct past tense form is 'it was not'. Also, the article 'a' is needed before 'good experience' to specify the noun.

× I when I bought shoes I notice it's not comfortable so I actually.

✓ When I bought shoes, I noticed they were not comfortable, so I actually...

The verb 'notice' should be in the past tense 'noticed' to match the past action 'bought'. Also, 'it's' (it is) should be 'they were' to agree with the plural noun 'shoes'. The sentence is incomplete but corrected for grammar.

× I mostly spend, uh, spends uh, around $200 on shoes and I believe, uh, good shoes, uh, takes me, take me and good places, so.

✓ I mostly spend around $200 on shoes and I believe good shoes take me to good places, so.

The verb 'spends' is incorrect because the subject 'I' requires the base form 'spend'. Also, 'takes me, take me' is redundant and confusing; 'take me' is correct as 'shoes' is plural, so 'take' is used without 's'.

× comfortable shoes tends to be durable and sustainable to use.

✓ comfortable shoes tend to be durable and sustainable to use.

The subject 'comfortable shoes' is plural, so the verb should be 'tend' instead of 'tends' to agree in number.