Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you like buying shoes? How often?
Thí sinh
Yes I know, I usually buy shoes here.
Giám khảo
Have you ever bought shoes online?
Thí sinh
No, I haven't.
Giám khảo
How much money do you usually spend on shoes?
Thí sinh
I usually spend on shoes only $10.
Giám khảo
Which do you prefer, fashionable shoes or comfortable shoes?
Thí sinh
And I choose comfortable shoes.
Do you like buying shoes? How often?
Điểm: 40.0Gợi ý: សូមពន្យល់ឲ្យច្បាស់ថាអ្នកចូលចិត្តទិញស្បែកជើងយ៉ាងដូចម្តេច និងបញ្ជាក់ពីបរិមាណឬកំឡុងពេលដែលអ្នកទិញ។ កុំប្រើពាក្យមិនត្រឹមត្រូវដូចជា "Yes I know"។
Ví dụ: Yes, I like buying shoes quite often, usually every few months when I need new ones.
Have you ever bought shoes online?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: ពេលឆ្លើយសំណួរនេះ អ្នកអាចបន្ថែមព័ត៌មានបន្ថែមដើម្បីធ្វើឲ្យការឆ្លើយមានភាពពេញលេញ និងធ្វើឲ្យការសន្ទនាមានភាពច្បាស់លាស់។
Ví dụ: No, I haven't bought shoes online yet because I prefer to try them on in the store first.
How much money do you usually spend on shoes?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: សូមបញ្ជាក់ពីការចំណាយរបស់អ្នកជាមួយនឹងពាក្យដែលត្រឹមត្រូវ និងបន្ថែមព័ត៌មានបន្ថែមដើម្បីឲ្យចម្លើយមានភាពពេញលេញ។
Ví dụ: I usually spend around $10 on shoes because I prefer affordable options.
Which do you prefer, fashionable shoes or comfortable shoes?
Điểm: 45.0Gợi ý: ចូរឆ្លើយដោយផ្តោតលើសំណួរនិងប្រើពាក្យភាសាអង់គ្លេសត្រឹមត្រូវ។ កុំចាប់ផ្តើមឆ្លើយដោយពាក្យ "And" ហើយបន្ថែមមូលហេតុឬការពិពណ៌នាដើម្បីបង្ហាញពីមូលហេតុដែលអ្នកជ្រើសរើស។
Ví dụ: I prefer comfortable shoes because I often walk long distances and need good support.
× Yes I know, I usually buy shoes here.
✓ Yes, I do. I usually buy shoes here.
The original sentence lacks proper sentence structure and clarity. 'Yes I know' is not an appropriate response to 'Do you like buying shoes?'. The correct response should affirm the question, such as 'Yes, I do.' followed by the additional information. Adding a comma after 'Yes' improves readability.
× I usually spend on shoes only $10.
✓ I usually spend only $10 on shoes.
The placement of 'only' is incorrect. 'Only' should be placed before the amount to correctly modify it. Also, the phrase 'spend on shoes only $10' is awkward; the correct order is 'spend only $10 on shoes.'
× And I choose comfortable shoes.
✓ I choose comfortable shoes.
Starting a sentence with 'And' is generally discouraged in formal speech. Removing 'And' improves sentence structure and clarity.