Shoes— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，例如“changing my changing new shoes is like change my style and my emotions”表达不清晰且重复。建议简化句子结构，避免重复，并使用更自然的表达方式。

Ví dụ: Yes, I really enjoy buying new shoes. I usually buy a new pair every three months because it helps me refresh my style and mood.

Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误，如“almost every shoes I have were bought online”应为“almost all the shoes I have were bought online”。表达不够自然，且缺少连贯的连接词。建议注意名词单复数和冠词的使用，并使用连接词使句子更流畅。

Ví dụ: Yes, actually, almost all the shoes I own were bought online. I find it very convenient because I can easily browse many styles and colors to choose from.

Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误，如“on one shoes”应为“on one pair of shoes”，且“reasonable interval”用词不当。建议使用更准确的词汇表达价格范围，并注意单复数和搭配。

Ví dụ: I usually spend around 700 to 1000 RMB on a pair of shoes. I think this price range is reasonable for me.

Gợi ý: 回答中语法错误较多，如“shoes have both fashionable style and also comfort”应为“shoes that have both fashionable style and comfort”，且表达不够流畅。建议使用完整句子并注意语法结构。

Ví dụ: To be honest, I prefer shoes that are both fashionable and comfortable. If a pair has these two qualities, I will really like it.

× I usually buy shoes almost every three months.

✓ I usually buy shoes almost every three months.

该句无明显单复数错误，保持原句。

× I think changing my changing new shoes is like change my style and my emotions.

✓ I think changing my new shoes is like changing my style and my emotions.

句中“changing my changing new shoes”重复且结构混乱，应去掉多余的“changing”，并且“is like change”应改为“is like changing”，保持动名词形式一致。

× Yes, actually almost every shoes I have were bought online.

✓ Yes, actually almost every pair of shoes I have was bought online.

“every shoes”错误，every后应接单数名词，且“shoes”是复数，需用“pair of shoes”表示一双鞋；动词“were”应与主语“every pair”保持单数一致，改为“was”。

× I think shoes online is really convenient to look at many styles and many colors that I can choose what I want.

✓ I think buying shoes online is really convenient to look at many styles and many colors so that I can choose what I want.

“shoes online is”结构不自然，应改为“buying shoes online”；“that I can choose what I want”语法不通顺，改为“so that I can choose what I want”。

× I usually spend maybe 700 to 1000 RMB on one shoes.

✓ I usually spend maybe 700 to 1000 RMB on one pair of shoes.

“one shoes”错误，shoes为复数，单数应为“one shoe”或“一双鞋”用“one pair of shoes”。

× To be honest, I may prefer shoes have both fashionable style and also comfort.

✓ To be honest, I may prefer shoes that have both a fashionable style and comfort.

“shoes have”缺少关系代词“that”；“fashionable style and also comfort”中“a fashionable style”需加冠词，且“also”位置不当，去掉更自然。

× I think it's if the shoes have both 2 characteristic I will really like it.

✓ I think if the shoes have both characteristics, I will really like them.

“2 characteristic”应为复数“characteristics”；“it's if”结构错误，应去掉“it's”；“I will really like it”中“it”指代不明，改为“them”指代“shoes”。