Shoes— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答は自然ですが、文法の誤り（"shoes worn out"は"shoes are worn out"が正しい）を直し、より簡潔に表現すると良いでしょう。また、"save the money"は"save money"が自然です。

Ví dụ: Yes, I like buying shoes, but not very often because I prefer to use the same pair for a long time. For example, I wait until my shoes are worn out before buying new ones, which helps me save money.

Gợi ý: 回答が少し不自然で、文法的な誤りがあります（"had a so lovely design"は"had such a lovely design"が正しい）。また、"I still use them because they are so"の意味が不明瞭なので、理由を明確に述べると良いです。

Ví dụ: Yes, I have bought shoes online before. For example, I purchased a pair made in Korea because they had such a lovely design and unique color. I still use them because they are very comfortable.

Gợi ý: 回答は内容が良いですが、最後の文の意味が不明瞭です（"to offer"は不要）。また、"a bit more"の代わりに"a little more"や"a bit extra"など自然な表現を使うと良いでしょう。

Ví dụ: I usually spend about ¥6000 on shoes because I prefer buying good quality ones that last a long time. For example, I often choose comfortable sneakers for daily use, so I don't mind paying a little more. This way, I can avoid buying new shoes frequently.

Gợi ý: 回答は意味が伝わりにくく、文法的にも不自然です。"make it make me more comfortable and make my feeling more better"は改善が必要です。より明確で簡潔な表現を心がけましょう。

Ví dụ: I prefer fashionable shoes because I like unique designs and colors. Wearing fashionable shoes makes me feel more confident and comfortable.

× I wait until my shoes worn out before I buy a new one.

✓ I wait until my shoes are worn out before I buy a new one.

The verb phrase 'worn out' requires an auxiliary verb 'are' to form the passive voice in present tense. Without 'are', the sentence is grammatically incorrect. Adding 'are' correctly forms the present passive construction.

× This way I can save the money.

✓ This way I can save money.

The definite article 'the' is unnecessary before 'money' when speaking generally. 'Money' is an uncountable noun and does not need 'the' unless referring to specific money previously mentioned.

× I have bought shoes online before or I purchased a pair of shoes made in Korea because they had a so lovely design and unique color.

✓ I have bought shoes online before, and I purchased a pair of shoes made in Korea because they had such a lovely design and unique color.

The sentence incorrectly uses 'or' instead of 'and' to connect two related statements. Also, 'a so lovely design' is incorrect; 'such a lovely design' is the correct expression to emphasize the quality.

× I still use them because they are so.

✓ I still use them because they are so comfortable.

The sentence is incomplete and unclear. 'They are so' needs an adjective to complete the meaning. Adding 'comfortable' clarifies why the student still uses the shoes.

× This way I can avoid buying new shoes to offer.

✓ This way I can avoid buying new shoes too often.

The phrase 'to offer' is incorrect in this context. The intended meaning is likely 'too often' to indicate frequency. Replacing 'to offer' with 'too often' corrects the prepositional error.

× I prefer fashionable shoes more because I like fashionable items and unique design or colored items make it make me more comfortable and make my feeling more better.

✓ I prefer fashionable shoes because I like fashionable items, and unique designs or colored items make me more comfortable and improve my feelings.

The sentence has multiple issues: 'prefer...more' is redundant; 'unique design or colored items make it make me' is confusing and ungrammatical; 'more better' is incorrect as 'better' is already comparative. The correction removes redundancy, clarifies meaning, and fixes comparative errors.