Shoes— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: คำตอบของคุณมีข้อผิดพลาดทางไวยากรณ์และคำศัพท์ที่ไม่ถูกต้อง เช่น 'issue' แทน 'shoes' และ 'explode' แทน 'express' ควรใช้คำที่ถูกต้องและชัดเจนมากขึ้น นอกจากนี้ คำตอบยาวเกินไปและไม่เป็นธรรมชาติ ควรตอบให้กระชับและชัดเจนมากขึ้น

Ví dụ: Yes, I like buying shoes quite often because they help me express my personal style. I usually buy a new pair every month, especially when I find comfortable shoes that fit well and match my outfit.

Gợi ý: คำตอบมีข้อผิดพลาดทางไวยากรณ์และคำศัพท์ เช่น 'bought you' แทน 'bought shoes' และ 'can bought' แทน 'can buy' ควรใช้คำกริยาที่ถูกต้องและประโยคที่สมบูรณ์ นอกจากนี้ ควรใช้คำเชื่อมเพื่อให้ประโยคลื่นไหลและชัดเจน

Ví dụ: Yes, I have bought shoes online. It was very convenient because I could choose from many styles without leaving my home. For example, I once purchased a pair from an international website that didn't have a physical store nearby.

Gợi ý: คำตอบมีข้อผิดพลาดทางไวยากรณ์และคำศัพท์ เช่น 'investigating' แทน 'investing' และ 'issue' แทน 'shoes' ควรใช้คำศัพท์ที่ถูกต้องและประโยคที่สมบูรณ์ นอกจากนี้ ควรให้รายละเอียดที่ชัดเจนและเชื่อมโยงกัน

Ví dụ: I usually spend a moderate amount of money on shoes, typically about 2000 to 3000 baht. However, I prefer investing in good quality shoes that are comfortable, even if they cost a bit more. For example, I often choose well-known brands.

Gợi ý: คำตอบมีข้อผิดพลาดทางไวยากรณ์และการใช้คำซ้ำ เช่น 'is is is' และ 'wear daily life' ควรใช้ประโยคที่ชัดเจนและถูกต้อง นอกจากนี้ ควรใช้คำเชื่อมเพื่อให้ประโยคลื่นไหลและมีความสมเหตุสมผล

Ví dụ: I prefer comfortable shoes over fashionable ones because comfort is important for daily wear. For example, when I go to school, I often choose sneakers because they are of good quality and comfortable.

× Yes, I really enjoyed buying issue quite often because they helped me explode my personal style and I usually buy a new pair every month E especially when I find comfortable chew that fit well and match my outfit.

✓ Yes, I really enjoy buying shoes quite often because they help me express my personal style and I usually buy a new pair every month, especially when I find comfortable shoes that fit well and match my outfit.

The sentence incorrectly uses past tense 'enjoyed' and 'helped' when the context is about a habitual action, so present tense 'enjoy' and 'help' should be used. Also, 'explode' is incorrect; the correct verb is 'express'. 'Chew' is a typo for 'shoes'.

× Yes, I really enjoyed buying issue quite often because they helped me explode my personal style and I usually buy a new pair every month E especially when I find comfortable chew that fit well and match my outfit.

✓ Yes, I really enjoy buying shoes quite often because they help me express my personal style and I usually buy a new pair every month, especially when I find comfortable shoes that fit well and match my outfit.

The word 'issue' should be 'shoes' to match the plural form. Also, 'chew' is a misspelling of 'shoes'.

× For example, I should lighter shoes shoe that both style and.

✓ For example, I should choose lighter shoes that have both style and comfort.

The sentence is incomplete and has singular/plural confusion. 'Shoe' should be 'shoes' to match plural, and the sentence needs completion for clarity.

× Yes, I have bought you online. So Tom, it was very convenient because I can bought it a lot of style and stuff without leaving my home.

✓ Yes, I have bought shoes online. So, it was very convenient because I can buy a lot of styles and stuff without leaving my home.

'Bought' is past tense and should be 'buy' after 'can' (modal verb). 'You' is a typo for 'shoes'. 'Tom' seems to be a mishearing or typo and is removed for clarity.

× Yes, I have bought you online. So Tom, it was very convenient because I can bought it a lot of style and stuff without leaving my home.

✓ Yes, I have bought shoes online. So, it was very convenient because I can buy a lot of styles and stuff without leaving my home.

'Style' should be plural 'styles' to match 'a lot of'. 'It' should be 'them' referring to shoes, but rephrased for clarity.

× For example, I was purchasing 1 shoe from an international website that I that didn't have physical store nearby.

✓ For example, I purchased a pair of shoes from an international website that did not have a physical store nearby.

'Was purchasing' is past continuous but simple past 'purchased' fits better. '1 shoe' should be 'a pair of shoes'. 'That I that' is redundant and removed.

× I usually spend a moderate amount of money on shoe, typically about 2000 to 3000.

✓ I usually spend a moderate amount of money on shoes, typically about 2000 to 3000.

'Shoe' should be plural 'shoes' because it refers to shoes in general.

× But I prefer investigating a good quality issue that are comfortable and even I even they cost a bit more.

✓ But I prefer investing in good quality shoes that are comfortable even if they cost a bit more.

'Issue' should be 'shoes'. 'Are' is correct for plural 'shoes'. 'Investigating' is incorrect; 'investing in' is the correct phrase.

× For example I often choose brand new.

✓ For example, I often choose brand new shoes.

The sentence is incomplete; 'shoes' is needed after 'brand new'.

× I prefer a comfortable shoe over fashionable shoe once because comfort is is is easy to wear daily.

✓ I prefer comfortable shoes over fashionable shoes because comfort is easy to wear daily.

Both 'shoe' should be plural 'shoes' to refer generally. 'Once' is unnecessary and removed.

× Wear daily life especially when I go to school for example, I often choose sneaker because it's good quality.

✓ In daily life, especially when I go to school, I often choose sneakers because they are good quality.

Sentence structure is awkward. 'Wear daily life' is incorrect; rephrased to 'In daily life'. 'Sneaker' should be plural 'sneakers'. 'It's' changed to 'they are' to agree with plural.