Shoes— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is too short and lacks clarity. Try to give a clear topic sentence and add specific reasons or details about how often you buy shoes. Use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy buying shoes quite often because I like to keep my collection updated. For example, I usually buy new shoes every few months to match different outfits.

Gợi ý: Your answer is very short and inappropriate in tone. Always respond politely and provide more information. You can mention your experience with online shopping and your opinion about it.

Ví dụ: Yes, I have bought shoes online several times. I find it convenient because I can compare prices and styles easily from home.

Gợi ý: Your answer is unclear and confusing. Please give a clear amount in your currency and explain if this is per pair or monthly. Avoid irrelevant words like 'lottery'.

Ví dụ: I usually spend around 170 to 200 dollars on a good pair of shoes because I prefer quality over quantity.

Gợi ý: Your answer is incomplete and contains inappropriate language. Please answer politely and explain your preference with reasons and examples.

Ví dụ: I prefer comfortable shoes because I often walk a lot during the day, so comfort is very important to me.

× Probably 170 or even 200 lottery.

✓ Probably 170 or even 200 dollars.

The word 'lottery' is incorrectly used as a quantifier for money. The correct quantifier should be 'dollars' to indicate the amount of money spent on shoes.