Shoes— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答较为自然且内容完整，但句子结构稍显复杂，且有语法错误（like应为likes）。建议简化句子结构，注意主谓一致，同时可以增加一些具体细节使回答更丰富。

Ví dụ: I don't buy shoes very often because the ones I have are enough for daily use. However, if I see a pair with a unique style, I would consider buying them to add variety to my collection.

Gợi ý: 回答内容相关且有例子，但存在语法错误（his应为 its，has it had重复），表达不够流畅。建议注意代词使用和时态，避免重复，同时可以用连接词使句子更连贯。

Ví dụ: Yes, buying shoes online is very convenient. For instance, last year I purchased a pair of sneakers with a star pattern. They are of good quality and fit me perfectly.

Gợi ý: 回答表达了观点和理由，但有语法错误（they worth应为 they are worth），且句子稍显冗长。建议注意语法准确性，简化句子结构，并使用连接词提升流畅度。

Ví dụ: I usually spend about CN¥500 on each pair of shoes. Although it's not cheap, they are durable and of good quality, so I believe they are worth the price.

Gợi ý: 回答结构清晰，使用了连接词，表达了个人观点和理由。建议可以增加更多具体细节或例子，使回答更丰富。

Ví dụ: I prefer shoes that are both fashionable and comfortable. For example, I wear stylish shoes when going to parties, but I choose comfortable sneakers for long walks to avoid foot pain.

× I'm not the kind of person who like buying shoes very often.

✓ I'm not the kind of person who likes buying shoes very often.

这里的关系代词who指代的是单数person，因此谓语动词like应使用第三人称单数形式likes。

× I really like his design with the pattern of stars on it.

✓ I really like its design with the pattern of stars on it.

这里的shoes是物品，应该用物主代词its而不是his。

× Besides, it has it had good qualities and the size fits me well.

✓ Besides, it has good qualities and the size fits me well.

句中出现了重复的时态表达“has it had”，应去掉多余的“it had”，保持现在时态。

× Well, I usually spend CN¥500 also on each pair of my shoes.

✓ Well, I usually spend CN¥500 on each pair of my shoes.

句中“also”位置不当，且不符合语境，应去掉。此处无复数错误，主要是词语使用不当。

× I found them very durable and with good qualities, enabling me to use them for a long time, so I think they worth the price.

✓ I found them very durable and with good qualities, enabling me to use them for a long time, so I think they are worth the price.

这里缺少系动词are，导致句子不完整。

× Can I say I like shoes that are both fashionable and comfortable? I have both of them in my shoe cabinet.

✓ Can I say I like shoes that are both fashionable and comfortable? I have both in my shoe cabinet.

这里的both后面不需要再加代词them，直接用both即可。