Shoes— Part 1 Báo cáo
Cuộc hội thoại
Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you like buying shoes? How often?
Thí sinh
I would say no. I maybe will buy shoes twice or three times per year because I think that shoes is not a necessary things which need to choose a higher band or expensive one.
Giám khảo
Have you ever bought shoes online?
Thí sinh
Definitely because nowadays technology improving at high speed so that we can buy everything we want online. And I always buy my shoes online because I think it is really convenient and I won't go to store which waste my time.
Giám khảo
How much money do you usually spend on shoes?
Thí sinh
I probably spend around $100 on my shoes because as I have said, shoes is not a necessary item I think, so it shouldn't be so expensive and also online shopping makes the price lower for me.
Giám khảo
Which do you prefer, fashionable shoes or comfortable shoes?
Thí sinh
For me I will choose comfortable shoes definitely because shoes is bought for yourself not for others. So you need to have a good experience and feel comfortable on it, not for attract others eyes on your shoes.
Đánh giá
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Part 1
Do you like buying shoes? How often?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: 你的回答表达了观点，但语法和用词有些错误，且句子结构不够自然。建议注意单复数形式，使用更自然的表达方式，并避免重复。
Ví dụ: I don't really like buying shoes. I usually buy them only two or three times a year because I don't think it's necessary to choose expensive or branded shoes.
Have you ever bought shoes online?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: 回答内容较完整，但句子连接不够流畅，部分表达不自然。建议使用连接词使句子更连贯，并注意语法时态和表达准确性。
Ví dụ: Definitely, I have bought shoes online. Nowadays, technology is improving rapidly, so we can buy almost anything online. I always buy shoes online because it's very convenient and saves me the time of going to physical stores.
How much money do you usually spend on shoes?
Điểm: 68.0Gợi ý: 回答中有语法错误，且表达略显重复。建议简化句子结构，注意单复数和冠词使用，并用更自然的表达方式。
Ví dụ: I usually spend about $100 on shoes. Since I don't consider shoes a necessary item, I prefer not to spend too much. Also, shopping online helps me find lower prices.
Which do you prefer, fashionable shoes or comfortable shoes?
Điểm: 72.0Gợi ý: 回答表达了观点，但语法和表达不够自然。建议注意句子结构，使用更地道的表达，并避免语法错误。
Ví dụ: I definitely prefer comfortable shoes because shoes are meant for yourself, not to impress others. It's important to have a good experience and feel comfortable rather than just attracting attention.
Ngữ pháp
× I maybe will buy shoes twice or three times per year because I think that shoes is not a necessary things which need to choose a higher band or expensive one.
✓ I maybe will buy shoes twice or three times per year because I think that shoes are not necessary things which need to choose a higher brand or expensive ones.
这里'shoes'是复数，谓语动词和后面的名词也应使用复数形式，'shoes is'应改为'shoes are'，'things'前不应有冠词'a'，且'band'应为'brand'。
× I probably spend around $100 on my shoes because as I have said, shoes is not a necessary item I think, so it shouldn't be so expensive and also online shopping makes the price lower for me.
✓ I probably spend around $100 on my shoes because as I have said, shoes are not necessary items I think, so they shouldn't be so expensive and also online shopping makes the price lower for me.
'shoes'是复数，谓语动词和后面的名词也应使用复数形式，'shoes is'应改为'shoes are'，'item'应改为复数'items'，'it'指代复数应改为'they'。
× For me I will choose comfortable shoes definitely because shoes is bought for yourself not for others.
✓ For me I will choose comfortable shoes definitely because shoes are bought for yourself not for others.
'shoes'是复数，谓语动词应使用复数形式，'shoes is'应改为'shoes are'。
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