Shoes— Part 1 Báo cáo
Cuộc hội thoại
Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you like buying shoes? How often?
Thí sinh
Yes, I like buying shoes. Sometimes I think that I am addicted buying shoes. I buy new pair of shoes every week, maybe because I think that's all my clothes need different kind of shoes. So when I buy new clothes, I make decisions to buy.
Giám khảo
Have you ever bought shoes online?
Thí sinh
Yes, I bought shoes online and my favorite online shoe stories are Zara, Shadowarius, Mango and Pashka. I always make decision favor of online shopping because I think this kind of shopping is more valuable, available and cheap for me.
Giám khảo
How much money do you usually spend on shoes?
Thí sinh
I spend $300 on shoes in every month. It depends how different kind of discounts my favorite shoe stores have, so I manage my money spent on this kind of shopping.
Giám khảo
Which do you prefer, fashionable shoes or comfortable shoes?
Thí sinh
I prefer both fashionable shoes and comfortable shoes when I am going in different kind of parties, for instance, wedding, birthday party and et cetera, I would show. I would choose fashionable shows. But if I go in mountains or in the sea resort, I would like to choose.
Đánh giá
Tổng
Part 1
Do you like buying shoes? How often?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: თქვენი პასუხი უნდა იყოს უფრო ბუნებრივი და ნაკლებად განმეორებითი. გამოიყენეთ სწორი გრამატიკა და გამოთქმა, მაგალითად, "I buy a new pair of shoes every week because I think different clothes need different shoes." ასევე, შეეცადეთ პასუხი იყოს მოკლე და კონკრეტული.
Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy buying shoes and usually purchase a new pair every week because I believe different outfits require different shoes.
Have you ever bought shoes online?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: თქვენი პასუხი უნდა იყოს უფრო სუფთა და ლოგიკური. გამოიყენეთ სწორი სიტყვები და გამოთქმები, მაგალითად, "I prefer online shopping because it is more convenient and affordable." ასევე, დაასახელეთ მხოლოდ რამდენიმე საყვარელი მაღაზია და გამოიყენეთ დაკავშირებული სიტყვები.
Ví dụ: Yes, I have bought shoes online. My favorite stores are Zara and Mango because online shopping is more convenient and often cheaper for me.
How much money do you usually spend on shoes?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: თქვენი პასუხი უნდა იყოს უფრო ზუსტი და გრამატიკულად სწორი. გამოიყენეთ ლინკინგ სიტყვები, მაგალითად, "I usually spend around $300 per month on shoes, depending on the discounts available at my favorite stores."
Ví dụ: I usually spend about $300 each month on shoes, but this varies depending on the discounts my favorite stores offer.
Which do you prefer, fashionable shoes or comfortable shoes?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: თქვენი პასუხი უნდა იყოს უფრო ორგანიზებული და სრულყოფილი. გამოიყენეთ ლინკინგ სიტყვები და დაასრულეთ აზრი, მაგალითად, "I prefer fashionable shoes for parties like weddings or birthdays, but I choose comfortable shoes for outdoor activities like hiking or going to the beach."
Ví dụ: I prefer fashionable shoes for events such as weddings or birthday parties, but when I go hiking or to the beach, I choose comfortable shoes.
Ngữ pháp
× Sometimes I think that I am addicted buying shoes.
✓ Sometimes I think that I am addicted to buying shoes.
The verb 'addicted' requires the preposition 'to' before the gerund form of the verb. The correct phrase is 'addicted to buying'. Without 'to', the sentence is grammatically incorrect.
× I buy new pair of shoes every week, maybe because I think that's all my clothes need different kind of shoes.
✓ I buy a new pair of shoes every week, maybe because I think that all my clothes need different kinds of shoes.
The phrase 'new pair of shoes' requires the article 'a' before 'new pair'. Also, 'different kind of shoes' should be pluralized to 'different kinds of shoes' to agree with the plural noun 'shoes'.
× I always make decision favor of online shopping because I think this kind of shopping is more valuable, available and cheap for me.
✓ I always make decisions in favor of online shopping because I think this kind of shopping is more valuable, available, and cheap for me.
The phrase 'make decision favor of' is incorrect. The correct expression is 'make decisions in favor of'. Also, 'decision' should be plural 'decisions' to match the context.
× I spend $300 on shoes in every month.
✓ I spend $300 on shoes every month.
The phrase 'in every month' is incorrect. The correct expression is 'every month' without the preposition 'in'.
× It depends how different kind of discounts my favorite shoe stores have, so I manage my money spent on this kind of shopping.
✓ It depends on what kinds of discounts my favorite shoe stores have, so I manage my money spent on this kind of shopping.
The phrase 'depends how' is incorrect; it should be 'depends on what'. Also, 'different kind of discounts' should be pluralized to 'kinds of discounts' to agree with the plural noun 'discounts'.
× I prefer both fashionable shoes and comfortable shoes when I am going in different kind of parties, for instance, wedding, birthday party and et cetera, I would show.
✓ I prefer both fashionable shoes and comfortable shoes when I go to different kinds of parties, for instance, weddings, birthday parties, and so on.
The phrase 'going in different kind of parties' is incorrect; it should be 'go to different kinds of parties'. Also, 'kind' should be plural 'kinds' to agree with 'parties'. 'Et cetera' is better replaced with 'and so on' in spoken English.
× I would show.
✓ (This sentence is incomplete and unclear; it should be removed or completed.)
The sentence 'I would show.' is incomplete and does not convey a clear meaning. It should be either completed with additional information or removed.
× But if I go in mountains or in the sea resort, I would like to choose.
✓ But if I go to the mountains or to the sea resort, I would like to choose comfortable shoes.
The preposition 'in' is incorrect here; it should be 'to' when referring to going to places. Also, the sentence is incomplete; specifying what is chosen improves clarity.
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