Shoes— Part 1 Báo cáo
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Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you like buying shoes? How often?
Thí sinh
To be honest, not often because I dislike buying new shoes. I like to wear a pair of old shoes until they are totally worn out because I think it can help me to save some money.
Giám khảo
Have you ever bought shoes online?
Thí sinh
I'm not often because I want to try the size in person and maybe the shoes sold online can be looked very nice, but I can't get the real size and maybe I wouldn't.
Giám khảo
How much money do you usually spend on shoes?
Thí sinh
And I think maybe about CN¥500 because I think in that price range I can buy some good shoes with high quality and that and them can they can be wired very comfortable. So like just like some famous brand Nike and.
Giám khảo
Which do you prefer, fashionable shoes or comfortable shoes?
Thí sinh
I prefer to wear comfortable shoes, for example, like a pair of sneakers. This is because I am a student and I really need to wear a sneaker to go to class. It can help me to reduce the relief the stress of work.
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Part 1
Do you like buying shoes? How often?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: 回答时应更自然流畅，避免重复表达“because”，并且可以增加一些具体细节来丰富内容。
Ví dụ: I don't buy shoes very often because I prefer to use my old ones until they're completely worn out. This way, I can save money and avoid unnecessary spending.
Have you ever bought shoes online?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: 回答不够连贯，语法和表达有误，应直接回答问题并用连词连接理由，表达更清晰。
Ví dụ: I don't often buy shoes online because I prefer to try them on in person. Sometimes shoes look nice online, but the size might not fit me properly.
How much money do you usually spend on shoes?
Điểm: 40.0Gợi ý: 回答中有语法错误和重复，应简洁明了地表达价格范围和原因，避免无意义的词汇。
Ví dụ: I usually spend around CN¥500 on shoes because I believe that price can get me good quality and comfortable shoes, like those from Nike.
Which do you prefer, fashionable shoes or comfortable shoes?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 回答中表达不够准确，句子结构有误，应更清晰地说明原因并避免重复。
Ví dụ: I prefer comfortable shoes, such as sneakers, because as a student I spend a lot of time walking to class. Comfortable shoes help me feel less tired and reduce stress.
Ngữ pháp
× I'm not often because I want to try the size in person and maybe the shoes sold online can be looked very nice, but I can't get the real size and maybe I wouldn't.
✓ I don't shop online often because I want to try the size in person, and maybe the shoes sold online look very nice, but I can't get the real size, and maybe I wouldn't buy them.
句子中使用了“I’m not often”，这是不正确的表达方式，应该用“I don't shop online often”来表达不经常做某事。动词时态和表达习惯错误。建议使用一般现在时的否定形式来表达频率。
× maybe the shoes sold online can be looked very nice, but I can't get the real size and maybe I wouldn't.
✓ maybe the shoes sold online look very nice, but I can't get the real size, and maybe I wouldn't buy them.
句中“can be looked very nice”结构不正确，且“wouldn't”后缺少宾语。应改为“look very nice”表示鞋子看起来很好，“wouldn't buy them”补全宾语。建议注意代词的使用和动词搭配。
× And I think maybe about CN¥500 because I think in that price range I can buy some good shoes with high quality and that and them can they can be wired very comfortable. So like just like some famous brand Nike and.
✓ I think maybe about CN¥500 because in that price range I can buy some good quality shoes that can be very comfortable, like some famous brands such as Nike.
句子结构混乱，存在多余词汇和语序错误。应简化句子，去除多余的“and that and them can they can be wired”，并调整词序使句子通顺。建议写句子时注意逻辑和语序。
× I like to wear a pair of old shoes until they are totally worn out because I think it can help me to save some money.
✓ I like to wear pairs of old shoes until they are totally worn out because I think it can help me save some money.
“a pair of old shoes”指一双鞋，后面用“they”指代复数，语义不一致。应使用复数“pairs of old shoes”或保持单数一致。建议注意单复数一致性。
× It can help me to reduce the relief the stress of work.
✓ It can help me relieve the stress of work.
“reduce the relief the stress”表达不正确，且“reduce”和“relief”混用。应使用“help me relieve the stress”表示缓解压力。建议注意动词和名词的正确搭配。
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