Shoes— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Câu trả lời của bạn cần rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn, tránh lặp từ và sử dụng cấu trúc câu đơn giản, tự nhiên. Bạn nên bắt đầu bằng câu chủ đề trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, sau đó bổ sung chi tiết cụ thể và dùng liên từ để câu văn mạch lạc hơn.

Ví dụ: Yes, I really like buying shoes. I have about 30 pairs, including basketball and casual shoes. I usually buy new shoes once or twice a month because I enjoy collecting different styles.

Gợi ý: Bạn nên tránh lặp từ và sử dụng các liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn. Ngoài ra, hãy sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp và chính xác hơn để diễn đạt ý tưởng rõ ràng.

Ví dụ: Yes, I usually buy shoes online because they are cheaper than in stores. Also, online shops offer a wider variety of models, whereas stores have limited options.

Gợi ý: Bạn cần trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi với câu chủ đề rõ ràng, tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và dùng từ chính xác. Nên giải thích rõ hơn về số tiền và lý do chi tiêu để câu trả lời cụ thể hơn.

Ví dụ: I usually spend about 2,200,000 Vietnamese dong on a pair of shoes, which is a normal price here. I think it's affordable because good shoes protect our feet well.

Gợi ý: Bạn nên sử dụng câu đơn giản, tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và dùng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc. Hãy trình bày rõ ràng ý kiến và lý do cụ thể để câu trả lời thuyết phục hơn.

Ví dụ: I prefer comfortable shoes because they make me feel good when I wear them. Fashionable shoes might look nice, but they can hurt your feet if they don't fit well.

× Like I I addicted to shoes like in my house, I like I got like 30 pairs of shoes or basketball shoes and casual shoes and I buy it like monthly and once a month or maybe two a month, twice a month.

✓ Like, I am addicted to shoes. In my house, I have about 30 pairs of shoes, including basketball shoes and casual shoes. I buy them monthly, once or maybe twice a month.

The original sentence misuses pronouns such as 'I I' and 'I got' which should be 'I am' and 'I have' respectively. Also, 'I buy it' is incorrect because 'shoes' is plural, so 'them' should be used. Correct pronoun usage improves clarity and grammatical accuracy.

× Like I usually boss you online because I found it like cheaper than when you bought it at store.

✓ Like, I usually buy shoes online because I find it cheaper than when you buy them at the store.

The verb 'boss' is incorrect; it should be 'buy'. Also, 'found' is past tense but the context requires present tense 'find'. 'Bought' should be 'buy' to maintain tense consistency. Correct verb forms are essential for clear communication.

× And I can find like I can search for a variety of models and when when you go at store you you like just have a few models to look at and when you buy it online you have like various.

✓ And I can search for a variety of models. When you go to the store, you only have a few models to look at, but when you buy online, you have various options.

The sentence misuses pronouns and has redundancy ('you you'). Also, 'go at store' should be 'go to the store'. 'Buy it online you have like various' is incomplete; it should specify 'various options'. Proper pronoun and preposition use improves sentence clarity.

× When when you go at store you you like just have a few models to look at

✓ When you go to the store, you only have a few models to look at.

The preposition 'at' is incorrect here; the correct preposition is 'to' when referring to going to a place. Using the correct preposition is important for grammatical accuracy.

× I think usually is about 2,2,000,000 Vietnam down per a pair and maybe in Vietnam is like a normal price of every shoes.

✓ I think it usually costs about 2,200,000 Vietnamese dong per pair, and maybe in Vietnam, this is a normal price for shoes.

'Vietnam down' should be 'Vietnamese dong'. 'Every shoes' is incorrect because 'shoes' is plural; 'every' is used with singular nouns. Also, 'per a pair' should be 'per pair'. Correct singular/plural usage and article use are necessary.

× I think it's not very much and because choose protect our feet and it is like affordable.

✓ I think it's not very expensive because shoes protect our feet and are affordable.

'Choose' is incorrect; it should be 'shoes'. The sentence also lacks proper subject-verb agreement and clarity. Correct word choice and sentence structure improve understanding.

× Yep, I prefer the comfortable shoes send the comfortable shoes make you feel great and you feel like good and when you wearing it.

✓ Yep, I prefer comfortable shoes because comfortable shoes make you feel great and good when you wear them.

'Send' is incorrect; it should be 'because'. 'You feel like good' should be 'you feel good'. 'When you wearing it' should be 'when you wear them' to match plural 'shoes'. Correct pronoun and verb forms are essential.

× But the comfortable the fashionable shoe is not guaranteed that you feel comfortable when you wear it and it might hurt your feet it if not suitable.

✓ But fashionable shoes do not guarantee that you will feel comfortable when you wear them, and they might hurt your feet if they are not suitable.

The sentence incorrectly mixes singular and plural forms ('the fashionable shoe' vs 'you wear it'). It should be plural 'shoes' and 'them'. Also, 'it if not suitable' is unclear; it should be 'if they are not suitable'. Proper pronoun and number agreement is necessary.