Shoes— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains some errors and redundancies. Try to respond directly and clearly, avoiding filler words and confusing phrases. For example, clarify your frequency of buying shoes and avoid unnecessary repetition.

Ví dụ: I don't buy shoes very often. Usually, I purchase a new pair every six or seven months because one pair lasts me quite a long time.

Gợi ý: Your answer has grammatical errors and is somewhat repetitive. Try to use correct verb tenses and avoid repeating words. Also, provide a clear reason with linking words to make your answer coherent.

Ví dụ: I have never bought shoes online because I don't trust online shops. Sometimes, there are scams, so I prefer to buy shoes in physical stores.

Gợi ý: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical mistakes. Try to answer directly with clear sentences and avoid unnecessary phrases. Also, provide specific information about your spending habits.

Ví dụ: I don't spend much money on shoes because I buy them infrequently, usually only once or twice a year.

Gợi ý: Your answer is understandable but contains some incorrect word choices and grammar errors. Try to use appropriate vocabulary and correct sentence structures. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

Ví dụ: I prefer comfortable shoes because they are lighter and more flexible. Fashionable shoes, especially sandals, can hurt my ankles, so comfort is more important to me.

× I am not a sauce person.

✓ I am not a shoe person.

The word 'sauce' is incorrect in this context; the student likely meant 'shoe'. This is a vocabulary error rather than a grammar error, but it affects clarity. The correct adjective should relate to shoes, not sauce.

× after buying one shoes, that will be enough for me up to five or six, six months.

✓ after buying one pair of shoes, that will be enough for me for up to five or six months.

The word 'shoes' is plural and cannot be preceded by 'one' alone; 'one pair of shoes' is the correct singular expression. Also, 'for up to five or six months' is the correct prepositional phrase to indicate duration.

× I really have a big trust issues so I I didn't trust online shops because sometimes they can fraud fraud and they they just robbed us.

✓ I really have big trust issues so I don't trust online shops because sometimes they can commit fraud and they just rob us.

'A big trust issues' is incorrect because 'issues' is plural and should not be preceded by 'a'. Also, 'didn't trust' is past tense but the context suggests a present general statement, so 'don't trust' is correct. The phrase 'they can fraud fraud' is incorrect; 'commit fraud' is the proper collocation. Repetition of 'they' is a mistake.

× So that's why I didn't bought a shoes online.

✓ So that's why I didn't buy shoes online.

After 'didn't', the base form of the verb should be used, so 'bought' is incorrect; it should be 'buy'. Also, 'a shoes' is incorrect because 'shoes' is plural; no article is needed here.

× As I have already told I am, I didn't prefer buying shoes in a month rather than a year, so I usually didn't spend my money.

✓ As I have already told you, I don't prefer buying shoes every month but rather every year, so I usually don't spend much money.

The sentence mixes past and present tenses incorrectly. 'Didn't prefer' should be 'don't prefer' to indicate a habitual action. 'In a month rather than a year' is awkward; 'every month but rather every year' is clearer. 'Didn't spend' should be 'don't spend' for habitual action. Also, 'my money' is vague; 'much money' is more appropriate.

× More money to buy your shoes, yeah.

✓ More money to buy shoes, yeah.

The pronoun 'your' is incorrect here because the speaker is talking about their own spending, not the listener's shoes. It should be omitted or replaced with 'my' if referring to self.

× I believe that comfortable 1 is more lightful and flexible than the fashionable one because the fashionable sandals are very very hurting because it hurts our ankles.

✓ I believe that comfortable shoes are lighter and more flexible than fashionable ones because fashionable sandals are very painful as they hurt our ankles.

'Comfortable 1' is incorrect; it should be 'comfortable shoes'. 'Lightful' is not a correct word; 'lighter' is the correct comparative adjective. 'Hurting' is a verb form; 'painful' is the correct adjective. 'Very very hurting' is incorrect; 'very painful' is appropriate. Also, 'it hurts our ankles' is better expressed as 'they hurt our ankles' referring to sandals.

× So comfortable shoes are the perfect one.

✓ So comfortable shoes are the perfect ones.

'Shoes' is plural, so the pronoun referring to them should also be plural: 'ones' instead of 'one'.