Shoes— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer should be more natural and complete. Start with a clear topic sentence directly answering the question, then add specific details using linking words. Avoid incomplete sentences and unclear phrases.

Ví dụ: Yes, I like buying shoes, especially those that are comfortable. I usually go shoe shopping twice a year because I prefer to buy quality shoes that last longer.

Gợi ý: Try to form complete sentences and use linking words to connect your ideas. Be more specific about your experience and reasons for your preference.

Ví dụ: I usually don't like buying shoes online because I often receive the wrong size. Therefore, I prefer to buy shoes in physical stores where I can try them on first.

Gợi ý: Your answer needs to be clearer and more structured. Use linking words to explain your points logically and avoid incomplete sentences. Be specific about your spending habits.

Ví dụ: I usually spend quite a lot of money on shoes, around £120 per pair. Because of this, I only go shoe shopping twice a year and save money beforehand.

Gợi ý: Make sure your sentences are complete and clear. Use linking words to connect your ideas and provide specific examples to support your preference.

Ví dụ: I definitely prefer comfortable shoes because they help me feel relaxed during work. For example, two months ago I bought a pair of comfortable shoes that I have been wearing frequently since then.

× I appreciate to buy shoes that are comfortable.

✓ I appreciate buying shoes that are comfortable.

The verb 'appreciate' is followed by a gerund (-ing form), not an infinitive. Therefore, 'to buy' should be changed to 'buying' to be grammatically correct.

× Moreover, I do go for shoe shopping twice in a year because I have.

✓ Moreover, I do go shoe shopping twice a year because I have.

The phrase 'go for shoe shopping' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'go shoe shopping'. Also, 'in a year' should be 'a year' without 'in'. The sentence ends abruptly with 'because I have' which is incomplete and unclear; it should be omitted or completed for clarity.

× Moreover, I do go for shoe shopping twice in a year because I have.

✓ Moreover, I do go shoe shopping twice a year.

The original sentence is incomplete and unclear due to the phrase 'because I have' without an object or explanation. Removing this fragment improves clarity and sentence structure.

× Usually don't like buying online shoes because often I get the ones that are not my size so I prefer to go to shops to buy my shoes.

✓ I usually don't like buying shoes online because I often get ones that are not my size, so I prefer to go to shops to buy my shoes.

The original sentence lacks a subject at the beginning ('I'). Also, 'online shoes' is awkward; 'shoes online' is more natural. Adding commas improves readability and sentence flow.

× Purchasing shoe online I don't prefer to do that.

✓ I don't prefer purchasing shoes online.

The original sentence has awkward word order and missing plural form. The subject 'I' should come first, and 'shoe' should be plural 'shoes'. The phrase is better expressed as 'I don't prefer purchasing shoes online.'

× Purchasing shoe online I don't prefer to do that.

✓ I don't prefer purchasing shoes online.

The noun 'shoe' should be plural 'shoes' because it refers to shoes in general, not a single shoe.

× I would say quite huge of money.

✓ I would say quite a huge amount of money.

The phrase 'quite huge of money' is incorrect. The correct expression is 'quite a huge amount of money' to quantify money properly.

× One pair of shoe I can get it close to £120.

✓ One pair of shoes I can get close to £120.

The noun 'shoe' should be plural 'shoes' when referring to a pair. Also, 'get it close' is redundant; 'get close' suffices.

× That's a big money.

✓ That's a lot of money.

'Money' is an uncountable noun and does not take 'a' or 'big' directly. The correct quantifier is 'a lot of'.

× So that is why I save more before I go for my.

✓ So that is why I save more before I go shopping.

The sentence ends abruptly with 'before I go for my' which is incomplete. Completing it as 'before I go shopping' makes the sentence clear and grammatically correct.

× I would definitely go for a comfortable shoes because that makes me appear decent hands more relaxed when I'm doing work.

✓ I would definitely go for comfortable shoes because they make me appear decent and more relaxed when I'm working.

The phrase 'a comfortable shoes' mixes singular article 'a' with plural noun 'shoes'. It should be 'comfortable shoes' without 'a'. Also, 'that makes me appear decent hands more relaxed' is unclear and incorrect; it should be 'they make me appear decent and more relaxed'. 'Doing work' is better expressed as 'working'.

× For example, two months ago I went for my shoe shopping, I got a comfortable shoe and I've really been using it often because.

✓ For example, two months ago I went shoe shopping, I got a comfortable pair of shoes and I've really been using them often.

'Went for my shoe shopping' is awkward; 'went shoe shopping' is correct. 'A comfortable shoe' should be 'a comfortable pair of shoes' or 'comfortable shoes'. 'It' should be 'them' to agree with plural 'shoes'. The sentence ends abruptly with 'because' which should be removed or completed.