Shoes— Part 1 Báo cáo
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Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you like buying shoes? How often?
Thí sinh
How often? Yes, I like buying shoes. I often buy shoes every month and umm I like collecting different variety of shoes like Air Jordans, Nike and Pumas.
Giám khảo
Have you ever bought shoes online?
Thí sinh
Yes, I have bought shoes online many times. Whenever I see sales or any promotions going on which are only online, I always prefer to order the variety of shoes that are there.
Giám khảo
How much money do you usually spend on shoes?
Thí sinh
For shoes, I always for shoes I never see how much money I would spend when I like something like any pair. I would rather spend even $500 on that, but it should be comfortable and look nice on me.
Giám khảo
Which do you prefer, fashionable shoes or comfortable shoes?
Thí sinh
I'm a very fashionable person, so most of the times I prefer fashionable shoes which are also comfortable. But for work, umm, I always prefer comfortable shoes because, uh, I have a job that requires a lot of walking, so for work I always buy comfortable shoes.
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Part 1
Do you like buying shoes? How often?
Điểm: 75.0Gợi ý: Try to avoid filler words like 'umm' and answer the question directly with a clear topic sentence. Also, use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and provide more specific details about why you like these brands or types of shoes.
Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy buying shoes and usually purchase a new pair every month. I especially like collecting different brands such as Air Jordans, Nike, and Pumas because they offer both style and comfort.
Have you ever bought shoes online?
Điểm: 80.0Gợi ý: Your answer is clear but could be improved by using linking words to make it more coherent and by specifying what types of shoes you prefer to buy online or why online shopping appeals to you.
Ví dụ: Yes, I have bought shoes online many times. For example, I usually shop during online sales or promotions because they offer a wider variety and better prices than physical stores.
How much money do you usually spend on shoes?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: Try to organize your answer more clearly by starting with a direct response and then explaining your reasoning. Avoid repetition and improve sentence structure for clarity.
Ví dụ: I don't usually set a budget for shoes; if I really like a pair, I am willing to spend up to $500. However, comfort and appearance are the most important factors for me.
Which do you prefer, fashionable shoes or comfortable shoes?
Điểm: 78.0Gợi ý: Avoid filler words like 'umm' and 'uh' and try to combine your ideas using linking words to make your answer more fluent and coherent.
Ví dụ: I usually prefer fashionable shoes that are also comfortable. However, since my job involves a lot of walking, I always choose comfortable shoes for work.
Ngữ pháp
× I like collecting different variety of shoes like Air Jordans, Nike and Pumas.
✓ I like collecting different varieties of shoes like Air Jordans, Nike and Pumas.
The phrase 'different variety' is incorrect because 'variety' is a singular noun and should be used with 'a' or 'the'. When referring to multiple types, the plural form 'varieties' is appropriate. Therefore, 'different varieties' correctly expresses multiple types of shoes.
× I always prefer to order the variety of shoes that are there.
✓ I always prefer to order the variety of shoes that are available.
The phrase 'the variety of shoes that are there' is awkward and unclear. Using 'available' clarifies that the shoes are accessible online. Also, 'variety' is correctly used here as a singular noun referring to a range of options.
× For shoes, I always for shoes I never see how much money I would spend when I like something like any pair.
✓ For shoes, I never pay attention to how much money I spend when I like something, like any pair.
The original sentence is repetitive and lacks clarity. Removing the repeated phrase 'for shoes' and restructuring the sentence improves readability and grammatical correctness.
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