Shoes— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答时应更自然流畅，避免重复表达，并且可以增加一些具体细节来丰富内容。比如说明为什么觉得买太多鞋是浪费钱。

Ví dụ: I don't enjoy buying shoes very much because I believe owning too many pairs is unnecessary and wasteful. Usually, I only buy two pairs a year to meet my basic needs.

Gợi ý: 回答可以更连贯，使用连接词，并且提供更具体的细节，比如描述一次具体的不愉快经历。

Ví dụ: Yes, I have bought shoes online before, but it wasn't a pleasant experience because I couldn't try them on first. For example, one pair didn't fit well, so I had to return them.

Gợi ý: 回答中有语法和表达不清的问题，建议简洁明了地表达花费，并避免重复。

Ví dụ: I usually spend around 200 yuan on a pair of shoes, and I buy two or three pairs each year. Spending 200 yuan is quite expensive for me.

Gợi ý: 回答中有语法错误和表达不清，建议使用更准确的词汇和句子结构，并且用连接词使表达更流畅。

Ví dụ: I definitely prefer comfortable shoes over fashionable ones. For many years, I have mostly worn lightweight sneakers because I need to stand for long periods every day.

× Actually I only need 2 pairs of shoes throughout the whole year.

✓ Actually, I only need 2 pairs of shoes throughout the whole year.

句子中数字2后面用复数pairs是正确的，原句无语法错误。此处仅加逗号以符合书面表达习惯。

× Yes, I have the online buying experience, but it is not a happy experience because I think we need to try the shoes on to actually decide whether we need to keep them.

✓ Yes, I have had the online buying experience, but it was not a happy experience because I think we need to try the shoes on to actually decide whether we need to keep them.

现在完成时应使用“have had”表示经历，原句中“have the experience”时态不正确，应改为“have had”。

× MMM, Maybe I'll spend about CN¥200 on one pair of shoes, and I normally will buy two or three pairs of shoes, and 200 is a high level for me. Usually I will I will buy.

✓ MMM, maybe I'll spend about CN¥200 on one pair of shoes, and I normally buy two or three pairs of shoes. 200 is a high amount for me. Usually, I will buy.

句子结构混乱，重复“will I will”错误，应删除重复部分，调整句子使其更通顺。

× For many years I only wear sneakers. Trainers with UMM, they are off light.

✓ For many years, I have only worn sneakers. Trainers with, umm, they are lightweight.

“For many years”表示过去持续到现在，应使用现在完成时“have worn”。“off light”应为“lightweight”，形容词用法错误。

× They are comfortable because I need to stand long time a day.

✓ They are comfortable because I need to stand for a long time a day.

“stand long time”缺少介词，应为“stand for a long time”，表示持续时间。