Shoes— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答中表达了观点，但句子较长且结构不够清晰，建议简化句子，避免重复，直接回答问题并补充具体细节。

Ví dụ: Yes, I like buying shoes, but I don't do it often because my mother usually buys shoes for me once every season. Also, I have a limited budget, so I can't buy shoes whenever I want.

Gợi ý: 回答内容较完整，但存在语法错误和重复词汇，建议注意语法准确性，避免重复，并使用连接词使表达更流畅。

Ví dụ: Yes, I have bought most of my shoes online because it is very convenient. You just need to visit a website, select the style and size, and place an order. This saves a lot of time since you don't have to go to the store.

Gợi ý: 回答中有语法错误和重复，表达不够流畅，建议注意动词形式和句子结构，避免口语填充词，表达更清晰。

Ví dụ: I usually spend around CN¥500 on shoes. I prefer investing in good quality shoes that are comfortable and fit well. I don't like spending too much money just for brand names.

Gợi ý: 回答表达不够清晰，语法和用词有误，建议简化句子，明确表达观点，并使用连接词使内容连贯。

Ví dụ: I prefer comfortable shoes because I am not very interested in fashion. My friends say that fashionable shoes are often uncomfortable, especially when walking a lot. Therefore, I usually avoid wearing them.

× my mother just buys shoes one season at a time

✓ my mother just buys shoes one season at a time

此句中“shoes”使用复数形式正确，无需修改。

× I don't have free money to buy some shoes I really like so I can't control this.

✓ I don't have free money to buy some shoes I really like, so I can't control this.

此句中缺少逗号连接两个独立分句，属于标点符号问题，不属于语法问题，故不修改。

× Yes, I bought most of my shoes online because it is very convenient.

✓ Yes, I have bought most of my shoes online because it is very convenient.

此处描述过去到现在的经历，应该使用现在完成时，表示动作对现在有影响。

× You just need to visit a website and choose the star and the size you wanted just to order them and this saves saves us a lot of time.

✓ You just need to visit a website and choose the style and the size you want to order them, and this saves us a lot of time.

“star”应为“style”，且“wanted”应为一般现在时“want”，因为描述的是一般事实。

× You don't need to go to the store.

✓ You don't need to go to the store.

此句无语法错误，无需修改。

× I don't spend too much money on shoes, sometimes I just cost, uh, CN¥500.

✓ I don't spend too much money on shoes; sometimes I just spend, uh, CN¥500.

“cost”用法错误，应使用“spend”表示花费。

× I prefer to investing in a good quality shoes that are comfortable and suitable.

✓ I prefer to invest in good quality shoes that are comfortable and suitable.

“prefer to”后应接动词原形“invest”，且“a good quality shoes”中“shoes”为复数，不应加冠词“a”。

× I I think too too expensive just to buy the brand, you know?

✓ I think it's too expensive just to buy the brand, you know?

缺少主语“it”，且“too too”重复，应改为“too”。

× Oh, actually I don't fashion person so I prefer the comfortable one.

✓ Oh, actually I am not a fashion person, so I prefer the comfortable one.

缺少系动词“am”，且“fashion person”前应加不定冠词“a”。

× Sometimes my friend said the fashion shoes are not very suitable and working on the street they will feel tired about it.

✓ Sometimes my friend says that fashionable shoes are not very suitable, and when working on the street, they will feel tired wearing them.

时态应为一般现在时“says”，且“fashion shoes”应改为“fashionable shoes”，句子结构不完整，需调整。

× Not the all the fashion shows, you know.

✓ Not all the fashion shoes, you know.

“Not the all the fashion shows”语义不清，应为“Not all the fashion shoes”，且“shows”应为“shoes”。

× So I I try to avoid it.

✓ So I try to avoid it.

重复“I”应删除一个。