Shoes— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答中表达了个人喜好，但语言不够自然，且内容有些混乱，建议用更自然的表达方式直接回答问题，并避免无关内容。

Ví dụ: I don't really like buying shoes because they are quite expensive in my country. Instead, I usually spend money on snacks or drinks, which make me feel happy and relaxed.

Gợi ý: 回答内容较完整，但语法和表达有些错误，建议注意时态一致性和句子结构，使表达更流畅自然。

Ví dụ: Yes, I often buy shoes online because there are many shopping apps available. It saves me time and I can easily exchange shoes if they don't fit.

Gợi ý: 回答中信息重复且表达不够清晰，建议简洁明了地说明花费金额及原因，避免语法错误。

Ví dụ: I usually spend around 200 to 300 yuan on shoes. Because prices have increased over time, I tend to buy cheaper shoes.

Gợi ý: 回答中有语法和用词错误，表达不够清晰，建议使用正确的词汇和句型，明确表达偏好。

Ví dụ: I prefer comfortable shoes because I'm not very interested in fashion. I usually buy affordable sports shoes that are warm and practical.

× I prefer to buy some beverage or snacks because it's so happy and relaxed.

✓ I prefer to buy some beverages or snacks because it makes me feel happy and relaxed.

这里需要使用复数形式的beverages，因为饮料通常是复数。并且原句中"it's so happy and relaxed"表达不清，应该改为"it makes me feel happy and relaxed"，表示买饮料或零食让我感到开心和放松。

× I often bought some shoes online because it saves my time to do other important things and I also change conveniently.

✓ I often buy some shoes online because it saves me time to do other important things and I can also change them conveniently.

句子中描述的是经常性的动作，应该用一般现在时"buy"而不是过去时"bought"。另外，"saves my time"应改为"saves me time"，更符合英语习惯。"I also change conveniently"表达不完整，应该补充宾语并用情态动词"can"表示能力。

× with the development of society shoes price became higher and I often buy some cheaper shoes.

✓ With the development of society, shoe prices have become higher and I often buy some cheaper shoes.

"shoes price"应为复数形式"shoe prices"，表示鞋子的价格。动词时态应与上下文一致，使用现在完成时"have become"更合适。

× I just get some cheaper and colds wearings such as sport shoes.

✓ I just get some cheaper and cold wearings such as sports shoes.

"colds"是名词，形容词应为"cold"。"wearings"不是常用词，建议用"clothes"或直接说"shoes"。"sport shoes"应为复数形式"sports shoes"。