Shoes— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和重复，表达不够自然。建议简化句子结构，避免重复，并使用更准确的时态和词汇。

Ví dụ: I don't buy shoes very often because I only replace them when my old ones are worn out.

Gợi ý: 回答中有语法错误和重复，表达不够流畅。建议使用正确的时态，避免重复，并用连词使句子更连贯。

Ví dụ: Yes, I usually buy shoes online because it's very convenient, and there are many sizes and brands to choose from. Also, it's easy to return shoes if they don't fit.

Gợi ý: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不清晰。建议使用正确的时态和词汇，简洁明了地表达观点。

Ví dụ: I usually spend a small amount of money on shoes because I prefer comfortable ones that are affordable. I only buy new shoes when necessary.

Gợi ý: 回答中有语法错误和重复，表达不完整。建议简化句子，避免重复，并清晰表达理由。

Ví dụ: I prefer comfortable shoes because I have to stand all day at work, so comfort is very important to me.

× So I I will buy shoes unless my my old shoes is break and.

✓ So I will buy shoes unless my old shoes are broken.

这里的主语是复数形式的“shoes”，谓语动词应使用复数形式“are”。另外，“break”应使用过去分词“broken”来表示状态。

× Yes, I usually bought shoes online because I think it's very convenient and there are there are a lot of size and brands can can make can make choice for me and it's convenient to change the uncomfortable shoes online.

✓ Yes, I usually buy shoes online because I think it's very convenient and there are a lot of sizes and brands to choose from, and it's convenient to exchange uncomfortable shoes online.

“usually”表示习惯性动作，应使用一般现在时“buy”而非过去时“bought”。“size”应为复数“sizes”，且“make choice”表达不正确，应改为“to choose from”。“change”在此语境中应为“exchange”，表示换货。

× Uh, personally, I spent a few money in buying shoes because, uh, I think it's not necessary in my normal life and I prefer to, uh, comfortable shoes and it's not cost much.

✓ Uh, personally, I spend little money on buying shoes because, uh, I think it's not necessary in my normal life and I prefer comfortable shoes and they don't cost much.

“a few money”用法错误，money是不可数名词，应使用“little money”。“spent”应改为一般现在时“spend”，与上下文时态一致。

× So, umm, if it's necessary, I will, umm, bought, uh.

✓ So, umm, if it's necessary, I will, umm, buy, uh.

“will”后应接动词原形，不能用过去式“bought”。

× ...so comfortable shoes is very essential in my normal life.

✓ ...so comfortable shoes are very essential in my normal life.

“shoes”是复数名词，谓语动词应使用复数形式“are”。

× I, I always work working in daily lives and my, my work requires me to stand all the day...

✓ I always work in daily life and my work requires me to stand all day...

“work working”重复且错误，应只用“work”。“daily lives”应为“daily life”。“all the day”应为“all day”。

× ...I prefer to practice practic.

✓ ...I prefer to practice.

“practic”拼写错误，应为“practice”。