Shoes— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答较为自然且内容相关，但存在语法错误和表达不够简洁的问题。建议减少语气词“Umm”，并注意句子结构，如“when they're the old ones get worn out”应改为“when the old ones get worn out”。同时，回答可以更简洁，避免重复表达。

Ví dụ: Yes, I like buying shoes because they are an important part of my outfit. I usually buy a new pair every three months, especially when my old ones wear out or when I find a new style I like.

Gợi ý: 回答内容丰富，但存在时态不一致和表达不准确的问题，如“order”应为“ordered”，“offered”应为“offer”。此外，平台名称“the Wu”不明确，建议使用更具体的表达。建议注意时态一致性和准确表达。

Ví dụ: Yes, I have been buying shoes online since high school. Back then, I mainly ordered from Taobao because it was convenient and had a wide variety. Nowadays, I prefer other platforms that offer better discounts.

Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不流畅，如“prefer to this price”应改为“prefer this price”。句子结构较复杂且重复，建议简化表达并注意语法准确性。

Ví dụ: I usually spend about CN¥500 on each pair of shoes, which I think is a reasonable price. This amount balances quality and cost, and the shoes usually last longer.

Gợi ý: 回答中多次使用“umm”影响流畅性，且句子结构不够清晰。建议减少语气词，使用更简洁明确的表达，并适当使用连接词使句子更连贯。

Ví dụ: I prefer fashionable shoes because they are an important part of my outfit when I dress up. I want to look stylish and confident, so I prioritize choosing trendy shoes.

× I usually buy a new pair about every three months, especially when they're the old ones get worn out or there is a new style I like.

✓ I usually buy a new pair about every three months, especially when the old ones get worn out or there is a new style I like.

句中“they're the old ones”中的“they're”是“they are”的缩写，语法不正确，应直接用“the old ones”。这是复数名词前多余的主语，属于单复数问题。

× Yes, I have been purchasing new shoes online since I was in high school. Back then, I mainly order new shoes from Taobao because it was convenient and offered a wide variety.

✓ Yes, I have been purchasing new shoes online since I was in high school. Back then, I mainly ordered new shoes from Taobao because it was convenient and offered a wide variety.

“Back then”指过去，动词“order”应使用过去式“ordered”，以保持时态一致。

× However, nowadays I choose other platforms like the Wu because they offered better discount.

✓ However, nowadays I choose other platforms like Wu because they offer better discounts.

“Nowadays”表示现在时，动词应使用现在时“choose”和“offer”，且“discount”应为复数“discounts”，保持时态和数的一致。

× I prefer to this price because it balances the quality and the price and I find that this kind of price lasts longer.

✓ I prefer this price because it balances quality and price, and I find that this kind of price lasts longer.

“prefer to this price”中“to”多余，应直接用“prefer this price”。此外，“the quality and the price”中冠词“the”可省略，表达更自然。

× So choosing trendy shoes umm are prioritized.

✓ So choosing trendy shoes is prioritized.

主语“choosing”是动名词单数，谓语动词应使用单数“is”，保持主谓一致。