Shoes— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: In your answer, try to use correct vocabulary and grammar, for example, use 'shoes' instead of 'show' and 'I like' instead of 'they love me'. Also, make your sentences clearer and more natural by avoiding redundancy and incomplete thoughts. Use linking words to connect ideas logically.

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy buying shoes quite a lot because they help me express my personal style. I usually buy new shoes every three months, especially during sales or promotions. I look for specific styles that are affordable but also of good quality. For example, I recently purchased a pair of running shoes that were both stylish and comfortable.

Gợi ý: Focus on using correct grammar and vocabulary, such as 'shoes' instead of 'show' and complete sentences. Use linking words like 'because' and 'for example' properly to make your answer coherent. Also, be specific about your experiences to enrich your answer.

Ví dụ: Yes, I have bought shoes online several times because it is very convenient. I can choose from a wide variety of styles and sizes without leaving my home. For example, I once purchased running shoes from an international website that offered better prices and more options than local stores.

Gợi ý: Improve your answer by correcting vocabulary ('shoes' not 'shows'), grammar, and sentence completeness. Use linking words to connect ideas and provide specific reasons for your spending habits. Avoid incomplete sentences and unclear phrases.

Ví dụ: Honestly, I usually spend a moderate amount of money on shoes, typically around $50 per pair. I prefer investing in good quality shoes that are comfortable and stylish, even if they cost a bit more. For example, I often choose well-known brand shoes because they last longer and feel better.

Gợi ý: Make your answer clearer by using correct grammar and vocabulary, such as 'shoes' instead of 'shoe'. Use linking words like 'because' and 'although' properly. Provide specific reasons and complete sentences to support your preference.

Ví dụ: I definitely prefer comfortable shoes because comfort is essential for my daily activities. For example, when I walk or run long distances, comfortable shoes help prevent pain and fatigue. Although fashionable shoes may look appealing, I believe comfort should come first.

× Yes, I enjoy buying show quite a lot because they love me to express my personal style.

✓ Yes, I enjoy buying shoes quite a lot because they help me to express my personal style.

The word 'show' is incorrect; the plural form 'shoes' should be used here because it refers to multiple items. Also, 'love me' is incorrect; it should be 'help me' to express the intended meaning.

× I usually buy new shows every three months, especially when there is a sale or promotion.

✓ I usually buy new shoes every three months, especially when there is a sale or promotion.

The word 'shows' is incorrect; the correct plural form is 'shoes' when referring to multiple pairs of footwear.

× So I need something specific and a cheaper one.

✓ So I need something specific and cheaper.

The phrase 'a cheaper one' is awkward and unnecessary here. The sentence should be concise and parallel, so 'something specific and cheaper' is better.

× Maybe I think about its quality as well.

✓ Maybe I also think about its quality.

The original sentence is awkwardly structured. 'Maybe I also think about its quality' is clearer and grammatically correct.

× For example, I recently purchased.

✓ For example, I recently purchased some shoes.

The sentence is incomplete; it lacks an object after 'purchased'. Adding 'some shoes' completes the sentence.

× Yes, I have bought show online several times because it's very convenient.

✓ Yes, I have bought shoes online several times because it's very convenient.

The word 'show' is incorrect; the plural form 'shoes' should be used here.

× I that I can I choose a wide variety of style and size without leaving my home.

✓ I like that I can choose a wide variety of styles and sizes without leaving my home.

The original sentence is ungrammatical and confusing. Adding 'like' and correcting 'style and size' to plural forms 'styles and sizes' improves clarity and grammar.

× For example, I want purchase running show from an international website which offer better price and more option than local store.

✓ For example, I want to purchase running shoes from an international website which offers better prices and more options than local stores.

'Show' should be 'shoes' (plural). 'Offer' should be 'offers' to agree with singular 'website'. 'Price' and 'option' should be plural. 'Store' should be plural to match 'local stores'.

× Honestly, I usually spend a moderate amount of money on shows, typically around $50 per pair.

✓ Honestly, I usually spend a moderate amount of money on shoes, typically around $50 per pair.

'Shows' is incorrect; the plural form 'shoes' is correct here.

× I prefer investing in good quality show that are comfortable and adorable, maybe even though it's cost a bit more.

✓ I prefer investing in good quality shoes that are comfortable and adorable, even though they cost a bit more.

'Show' should be 'shoes' (plural). 'It's cost' is incorrect; it should be 'they cost' to agree with plural 'shoes'. 'Maybe even though' is awkward; 'even though' is sufficient.

× For example, I often choose brand shoes that are well known and it.

✓ For example, I often choose brand shoes that are well known and reliable.

The sentence ends abruptly with 'and it.' It needs a proper adjective or phrase to complete the thought.

× I definitely prefer comfortable shoes because comfort is essential for my daily activity.

✓ I definitely prefer comfortable shoes because comfort is essential for my daily activities.

'Activity' should be plural 'activities' to refer to various daily tasks.

× For example, when I want to walk or run for the long distance, may be comfortable should prevent me from the pain and fatigue.

✓ For example, when I want to walk or run long distances, comfortable shoes should prevent me from pain and fatigue.

'May be' is incorrect; it should be 'comfortable shoes'. 'For the long distance' should be 'long distances'. 'Prevent me from the pain' should be 'prevent me from pain'.

× Although fashionable shoe may look appealing and good looking, I believe particularly should come.

✓ Although fashionable shoes may look appealing and good looking, I believe comfort should come first.

'Shoe' should be plural 'shoes'. The sentence is incomplete and unclear; adding 'comfort should come first' completes the thought.