Shoes— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答缺乏条理，表达不够清晰，存在语法错误和重复，建议简化句子结构，直接回答问题，并用连贯的句子说明原因。

Ví dụ: I don't buy shoes very often because after graduation, I have many expenses like rent and transportation, so I need to save money and can't afford new shoes frequently.

Gợi ý: 回答较为完整，但句子较长且有些重复，建议使用连接词使表达更流畅，同时注意语法准确。

Ví dụ: I have never bought shoes online because I am afraid of fake products. Also, since I cannot try them on, I feel uncertain about their quality.

Gợi ý: 回答不完整且表达混乱，缺乏具体细节，建议直接回答问题并提供具体数字或范围，同时用连贯的句子说明理由。

Ví dụ: I usually spend little money on shoes because I prefer to maintain my old ones. Most of the time, I don't need new shoes as long as the old ones look good and are comfortable.

Gợi ý: 回答表达不够流畅，语法和用词有误，建议使用更准确的表达方式，并用连接词使句子更连贯。

Ví dụ: I prefer comfortable shoes because fashionable ones are usually more expensive. Depending on my budget, I choose affordable shoes so I can spend money on other things I enjoy.

× you got don't have enough free money to buy a new buy buy a new shoes.

✓ you don't have enough free money to buy new shoes.

这里的'shoes'是复数，前面的'a new'是单数冠词，二者不匹配。应去掉'a new'，直接用复数形式'shoes'。

× Actually I never bought shoes online on Internet because I am afraid of buying fake products and you since you can not physically touch and try the shoes, you can only rely on pictures which make me feel uncertain about their quality.

✓ Actually I have never bought shoes online on the Internet because I am afraid of buying fake products and since you cannot physically touch and try the shoes, you can only rely on pictures which make me feel uncertain about their quality.

这里描述的是从过去到现在的经历，应该用现在完成时'have never bought'而不是一般过去时'bought'。另外，'on Internet'应改为'on the Internet'。

× Well, compared compared with buy a new shoes, I rather than to cost much more money to maintain.

✓ Well, compared with buying new shoes, I would rather spend much more money to maintain them.

'a new shoes'中'shoes'是复数，不能用单数冠词'a'。'compared with buy'应改为'compared with buying'。此外，句子结构不完整，需调整。

× Well, compared compared with buy a new shoes, I rather than to cost much more money to maintain.

✓ Well, compared with buying new shoes, I would rather spend much more money to maintain them.

'compared with'后面应接动名词形式'buying'，而不是动词原形'buy'。

× It's perfect because I think you didn't you actually in in the most of time you don't need you don't need a new you don't need a pair of new shoes.

✓ It's perfect because I think that most of the time you don't need a new pair of shoes.

句子中时态混乱，'didn't'不合适，应使用一般现在时'don't need'，且表达应简洁明确。

× you don't need a new you don't need a pair of new shoes.

✓ you don't need a new pair of shoes.

'a new'后面应接单数名词或单数量词，这里用'pair of shoes'表示一双鞋，正确。

× Well, I think the fashionable shoes were more expensive.

✓ Well, I think fashionable shoes are more expensive.

表达一般事实时应使用一般现在时，主语是复数'shoes'，谓语用'are'。

× So uh, depends on economic.

✓ So, it depends on the economy.

'depends on economic'中'economic'是形容词，需用名词形式'the economy'。

× Like I can spend my money to other things, other stuffs that I enjoy it.

✓ Like I can spend my money on other things, other stuff that I enjoy.

'stuffs'是不可数名词，不能用复数形式，应为'stuff'。此外，'spend money to'应为'spend money on'。