Shoes— Part 1 Báo cáo
Cuộc hội thoại
Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you like buying shoes? How often?
Thí sinh
I don't like buying shoes very often because I usually buy them from high quality store where shoes are quite expensive. Since the shoes are adorable, I can keep them for about 3 years before needing new ones.
Giám khảo
Have you ever bought shoes online?
Thí sinh
Yes, I have bought shoes online several time because it save my tie especially during uh online shopping festival. Uh, I can get shoes I want and very lower price thanks to the discount and the promotions.
Giám khảo
How much money do you usually spend on shoes?
Thí sinh
I usually spend quite a bit of money on my shoes because I believe they are an important part of my outfits. For example, when I wear a pair of great shoes, I feel comfortable all day. Also, collecting shoes is one of my hobbies.
Giám khảo
Which do you prefer, fashionable shoes or comfortable shoes?
Thí sinh
I definitely prefer comfortable shoes. If my feet feel uncomfortable, it can cause a lot of pain or affect my daily activities. For example, if I have a great shoes, I can stand or walk for a long time without any problem.
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Part 1
Do you like buying shoes? How often?
Điểm: 75.0Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不够自然，如“high quality store”应为“high-quality stores”，“adorable”用词不当，建议使用更合适的形容词如“durable”或“stylish”。同时，句子较长且缺少连接词，建议简化并使用连接词使表达更流畅。
Ví dụ: I don't buy shoes very often because I usually purchase them from high-quality stores where shoes are quite expensive. Since the shoes are durable, I can keep them for about three years before needing new ones.
Have you ever bought shoes online?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: 回答中有语法错误，如“several time”应为“several times”，“save my tie”应为“save my time”，以及表达不够连贯，建议减少口头语“uh”，并使用连接词使句子更自然。
Ví dụ: Yes, I have bought shoes online several times because it saves me time, especially during online shopping festivals. Moreover, I can get the shoes I want at a much lower price thanks to discounts and promotions.
How much money do you usually spend on shoes?
Điểm: 80.0Gợi ý: 回答内容较好，但可以增加更多具体细节和连接词，使表达更丰富和连贯。例如，说明具体花费金额或品牌，使用“because”或“so”连接句子。
Ví dụ: I usually spend a considerable amount of money on my shoes because I believe they are an important part of my outfits. For example, when I wear a pair of comfortable and stylish shoes, I feel confident and comfortable all day. Also, collecting shoes is one of my hobbies, so I like to invest in quality pairs.
Which do you prefer, fashionable shoes or comfortable shoes?
Điểm: 78.0Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误，如“a great shoes”应为“great shoes”，建议使用复数形式。可以增加连接词如“because”来增强逻辑性，同时丰富细节使回答更具体。
Ví dụ: I definitely prefer comfortable shoes because if my feet feel uncomfortable, it can cause a lot of pain and affect my daily activities. For example, when I wear great shoes, I can stand or walk for a long time without any problems.
Ngữ pháp
× I have bought shoes online several time because it save my tie especially during uh online shopping festival.
✓ I have bought shoes online several times because it saves my time especially during uh online shopping festival.
这里的 'several time' 应该用复数形式 'several times'，因为表示多次。'save' 应该用第三人称单数形式 'saves'，因为主语是单数 'it'。'tie' 应该是 'time'，是拼写错误。
× I have bought shoes online several time because it save my tie especially during uh online shopping festival.
✓ I have bought shoes online several times because it saves my time especially during uh online shopping festival.
动词 'save' 应该用第三人称单数形式 'saves'，因为主语是单数 'it'。
× If I have a great shoes, I can stand or walk for a long time without any problem.
✓ If I have great shoes, I can stand or walk for a long time without any problem.
'a great shoes' 中 'shoes' 是复数，不能用不定冠词 'a'，应去掉 'a'。
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