Shoes— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答较为自然，但表达略显冗长且有语法错误，如“so that I need some new shoes”不够地道。建议简化句子结构，避免重复表达，并注意语法准确性。

Ví dụ: I don't really enjoy buying shoes. I usually buy new ones once or twice a year when the seasons change.

Gợi ý: 回答中时态使用不一致（'often bought'应为'often buy'），且部分表达不够自然，如“see others comments”。建议注意时态一致性，使用更地道的表达，并用连接词使句子更连贯。

Ví dụ: Yes, I often buy shoes online because it's convenient. I can browse many types and read other people's reviews. However, I also like buying shoes in stores because I can try them on.

Gợi ý: 回答不够清晰，表达混乱且有语法错误，如“between these reflections”和“are suit for different money”不符合英语习惯。建议用简单明了的句子表达价格范围，并说明原因。

Ví dụ: I usually spend between 100 and 500 yuan on shoes because different types of shoes have different prices.

Gợi ý: 回答表达基本清楚，但有语法错误，如“a guy who really like”和“a comfortable shoes”。建议注意主谓一致和单复数形式，同时可以用连接词使表达更流畅。

Ví dụ: I prefer comfortable shoes because I like walking a lot. Since I walk every day, I need shoes that are comfortable for me.

× I usually buy shoes one or two times in a year just for the season change so that I need some new shoes.

✓ I usually buy shoes once or twice a year just for the season change so that I need some new shoes.

这里“one or two times”表达不自然，应该用“once or twice”表示“一次或两次”，更符合英语习惯。

× Yes, I often bought shoes online because it is convenient for me.

✓ Yes, I often buy shoes online because it is convenient for me.

句子中使用了“often”表示经常发生的动作，应该用一般现在时“buy”，而不是过去时“bought”。

× I can see many kind of shoes and see others comments for the shoes.

✓ I can see many kinds of shoes and see others' comments on the shoes.

“many kind of shoes”应为复数形式“many kinds of shoes”；“others comments”应为所有格“others' comments”；“comments for the shoes”应改为“comments on the shoes”更地道。

× But I also like buy shoes offline because I can try it by myself.

✓ But I also like buying shoes offline because I can try them by myself.

“like”后面应接动名词形式“buying”；“try it”中的“it”指鞋子，应使用复数“them”。

× Maybe 100 to 500 between these reflections because I think different kinds of shoes are suit for different money.

✓ Maybe 100 to 500 yuan for these purchases because I think different kinds of shoes suit different prices.

“between these reflections”表达不清，应改为“for these purchases”；“are suit for”错误，应为“suit”；“different money”应改为“different prices”。

× I prefer the comfortable shoes because I'm a guy who really like walking.

✓ I prefer comfortable shoes because I'm a guy who really likes walking.

“the comfortable shoes”不需要定冠词“the”；“who really like”主语是单数“guy”，动词应加-s变为“likes”。

× I often walk every day so I need a comfortable shoes for me.

✓ I often walk every day so I need comfortable shoes for me.

“a comfortable shoes”中“shoes”是复数，不能用不定冠词“a”，应去掉“a”。