Shoes— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Try to avoid filler words like 'uh' and be more concise. Start with a clear topic sentence directly answering the question, then add specific reasons with linking words to improve coherence. For example, mention how often you buy shoes and why, using linking words like 'because' or 'so'.

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy buying shoes and usually purchase new pairs every two or three months because I find them comfortable and they help me express my personal style.

Gợi ý: Avoid unnecessary fillers and unclear phrases. Provide a clear topic sentence and support it with specific details using linking words. For example, mention when you bought shoes online, the brand, quality, and your recommendation to friends.

Ví dụ: Yes, I bought shoes online last month from a popular brand called Shein. The shoes are lightweight and of good quality, so I often wear them and have recommended the app to my friends.

Gợi ý: Clarify your answer and avoid confusing or contradictory statements. Provide a clear amount or range you spend, explain your preference for quality or brand, and use linking words to connect ideas logically.

Ví dụ: I usually spend around $50 to $100 on shoes because I prefer good quality and branded products. I buy new shoes when I need them or when my old ones are worn out.

Gợi ý: Avoid filler words and improve sentence structure for clarity. Start with a clear topic sentence, then use linking words like 'however' or 'but' to explain your preferences in different situations with specific examples.

Ví dụ: I prefer both fashionable and comfortable shoes depending on the occasion. For example, I choose comfortable shoes when I go to the park for walking, but I wear fashionable shoes when I attend college or special events.

× I bought a shoe from uh, she and I it's very good quality and uh, branded shoes and I love to wear shoes and it's very light and whenever I go somewhere, then I always wear their shoes and I also recommend my friends to buy the shoes from this app.

✓ I bought a shoe from, uh, Shein. It is very good quality and branded shoes. I love to wear these shoes because they are very light. Whenever I go somewhere, I always wear these shoes and I also recommend my friends to buy shoes from this app.

The original sentence incorrectly used 'she and I' instead of the brand name 'Shein'. Also, the sentence was a run-on and lacked proper punctuation. Breaking it into shorter sentences improves clarity. 'It's very light' should refer to 'these shoes' (plural), so 'they are very light' is correct. 'Their shoes' is incorrect when referring to the shoes owned by the speaker; 'these shoes' is appropriate.

× I bought a shoe from uh, she and I it's very good quality and uh, branded shoes and I love to wear shoes and it's very light and whenever I go somewhere, then I always wear their shoes and I also recommend my friends to buy the shoes from this app.

✓ I bought a pair of shoes from Shein. They are very good quality and branded shoes. I love to wear these shoes because they are very light. Whenever I go somewhere, I always wear these shoes and I also recommend my friends to buy shoes from this app.

The original sentence inconsistently switches between singular and plural forms. 'A shoe' should be 'a pair of shoes' when referring to footwear. Also, 'it's very light' should be 'they are very light' to agree with the plural noun 'shoes'. Consistent singular/plural agreement is necessary for clarity.

× I also recommend my friends to buy the shoes from this app.

✓ I also recommend that my friends buy shoes from this app.

The verb 'recommend' is typically followed by 'that' plus a clause with the base form of the verb, not 'to' plus an infinitive. Therefore, 'recommend my friends to buy' is incorrect; it should be 'recommend that my friends buy'.

× No, I don't spend too much money on shoes, but, uh, usually I spend like, uh, uh, $5200 on shoes and I always buy the shoes That's like I have a good quality and good branded shoes and I also buy shoes whenever I don't have, uh, and they want to go to there.

✓ No, I don't spend too much money on shoes, but usually I spend about $520 on shoes. I always buy shoes that are good quality and branded. I also buy shoes whenever I don't have any or when I want to go somewhere.

The original sentence has inconsistent singular/plural usage and unclear phrasing. '$5200' is likely a mistake; '$520' is more reasonable. 'I always buy the shoes That's like I have a good quality and good branded shoes' is incorrect; it should be 'I always buy shoes that are good quality and branded.' Also, 'whenever I don't have, uh, and they want to go to there' is unclear; corrected to 'whenever I don't have any or when I want to go somewhere.' Consistent plural forms and clearer phrasing improve understanding.

× I also buy shoes whenever I don't have, uh, and they want to go to there.

✓ I also buy shoes whenever I don't have any or when I want to go somewhere.

The phrase 'go to there' is incorrect; 'there' does not require the preposition 'to' in this context. Also, the sentence was incomplete and unclear. Replacing it with 'when I want to go somewhere' is grammatically correct and clearer.

× Well, I prefer both type like fashionable and comfortable as well.

✓ Well, I prefer both types: fashionable and comfortable.

'Both' refers to two items and should be followed by a plural noun, so 'types' is correct instead of 'type'. Also, 'like' is unnecessary here and can be omitted for clarity.

× Uh, whenever I have to go, uh, go park, like for walking, then I always prefer to be at a comfortable shoes.

✓ Whenever I have to go to the park for walking, I always prefer to wear comfortable shoes.

The phrase 'go park' is missing the preposition 'to'. Also, 'prefer to be at a comfortable shoes' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'prefer to wear comfortable shoes'. Prepositions and verb usage need correction for grammatical accuracy.

× And whenever I go like college and I can special location, then I like to hear a fashionable shoes.

✓ And whenever I go to college or a special location, I like to wear fashionable shoes.

The phrase 'go like college and I can special location' is incorrect. It should be 'go to college or a special location'. Also, 'like to hear a fashionable shoes' is incorrect; it should be 'like to wear fashionable shoes'. Correct prepositions and verb usage are necessary.

× So I think it's like depend on the time to time whenever, which type of shower.

✓ So I think it depends on the time and which type of shoes I wear.

'It's like depend' is incorrect; the verb should agree with the singular subject 'it', so 'it depends' is correct. 'Time to time' should be 'time to time' or better 'depends on the time'. 'Shower' is a mispronunciation or typo for 'shoes'. The sentence needs restructuring for clarity and correct singular/plural agreement.