Shoes— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is a bit repetitive and has grammatical errors. Try to be more concise and clear by avoiding redundancy and using correct grammar. For example, use 'I usually buy shoes when my old ones are worn out and I need new pairs.'

Ví dụ: I usually buy shoes when my old ones are worn out and I need new pairs. I don't buy shoes very often, only when necessary.

Gợi ý: Your answer has grammatical mistakes and unclear expressions. Try to use correct prepositions and complete your sentences. Also, use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

Ví dụ: Yes, I have bought shoes online several times. Sometimes I find it difficult to choose the right size, but other times I get perfect pairs. Overall, I feel comfortable buying shoes online.

Gợi ý: Your answer is incomplete and has repetition and grammatical errors. Try to complete your answer with clear reasons and avoid repeating words unnecessarily.

Ví dụ: The amount I spend on shoes depends on their purpose. If I want durable and comfortable shoes, I buy more expensive ones. But for casual use, I prefer cheaper shoes.

Gợi ý: Your answer is unclear and repetitive. Try to organize your ideas clearly and avoid repeating words. Use linking words to explain your preference logically.

Ví dụ: I always prefer comfortable shoes because they help me walk and work better. For example, when I ride my bike or work, comfortable shoes make my tasks easier.

× I usually buy shoes when I feel it's necessity, when my old one is getting old and I need a new pairs.

✓ I usually buy shoes when I feel it's a necessity, when my old ones are getting old and I need new pairs.

The word 'necessity' is a singular noun and needs the article 'a' before it. 'Old one' should be plural 'old ones' to match 'pairs' which is plural. 'A new pairs' is incorrect because 'pairs' is plural and should not have 'a' before it.

× Yes, I bought shoes on online for frequent times.

✓ Yes, I bought shoes online frequently.

The phrase 'on online' is incorrect; 'online' does not need a preposition. 'For frequent times' is awkward; 'frequently' is the correct adverb form.

× Yes, I bought shoes on online for frequent times.

✓ Yes, I bought shoes online frequently.

The preposition 'on' before 'online' is unnecessary and incorrect. 'Online' functions as an adverb here.

× Sometimes I face difficulties to choose actual size, sometimes I got perfect pairs.

✓ Sometimes I face difficulties choosing the actual size; sometimes I get perfect pairs.

'Difficulties to choose' should be 'difficulties choosing' to use the gerund form after 'face difficulties'. 'Got' should be 'get' to maintain present tense. 'Actual size' needs the definite article 'the'.

× Sometimes I face difficulties to choose actual size, sometimes I got perfect pairs.

✓ Sometimes I face difficulties choosing the actual size; sometimes I get perfect pairs.

The verb 'got' is past tense but the sentence context is present tense; it should be 'get'.

× So I purchase shoes after my necessary necessity.

✓ So I purchase shoes when necessary.

'Necessary necessity' is redundant; 'when necessary' is a better phrase. Also, 'purchase shoes after my necessary necessity' is awkward and incorrect.

× It depends on which shoes I buy. When I buy shoes for for longer, durable, durability and for comfortable purpose then I buy some expensive shoes.

✓ It depends on which shoes I buy. When I buy shoes for durability and comfort, I buy some expensive ones.

The phrase 'for for longer, durable, durability and for comfortable purpose' is ungrammatical and redundant. 'Durability and comfort' are better noun forms. 'Some expensive shoes' can be replaced with 'some expensive ones' to avoid repetition.

× I always prefer comfortable shoes because it gives me more comfortable when in a walk or in my in a in my work and bike comfortable shoes I can make great job so I think.

✓ I always prefer comfortable shoes because they make me more comfortable when I walk or work and ride my bike. Comfortable shoes help me do a great job, I think.

The original sentence is fragmented and repetitive. 'It gives me more comfortable' is incorrect; it should be 'they make me more comfortable'. The phrase 'when in a walk or in my in a in my work and bike' is confusing and needs to be clarified as 'when I walk or work and ride my bike'. The last part is rephrased for clarity.