Shoes— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答时语法错误较多，表达不够流畅，且有较多填充词。建议简化句子结构，避免重复，使用更自然的表达方式。

Ví dụ: Yes, I like buying shoes because I often do sports like running and jogging. Therefore, choosing the right shoes is very important. I usually buy shoes once or twice each semester.

Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清的问题，且内容不够具体。建议使用更准确的词汇，避免模糊表达，并补充具体细节。

Ví dụ: Yes, I buy most of my shoes online because it is very convenient. However, sometimes the shoes don't fit well, which can be frustrating.

Gợi ý: 回答中语法和表达不准确，数字表达混乱。建议清晰表达价格范围，避免语法错误，并使用连贯的句子。

Ví dụ: I usually buy shoes twice a semester, and each pair costs between 500 and 600 Chinese yuan, which I think is reasonable.

Gợi ý: 回答不完整且表达不流畅，缺少具体细节。建议完整表达观点，使用连贯句子，并补充选择原因。

Ví dụ: I prefer shoes that are both fashionable and comfortable. Although it takes me a long time to choose, I believe it's worth it because I can wear them for a long time.

× I like do some sports like running, jogging.

✓ I like doing some sports like running, jogging.

动词like后面接动名词doing，而不是动词原形do。动词后接动名词是固定搭配。

× if I buy a shoes twice per semester

✓ if I buy shoes twice per semester

a shoes中shoes是复数，前面不能用不定冠词a，a只能修饰单数名词。

× it will cost a long time to for me to choose shows.

✓ it will take a long time for me to choose shoes.

shows应为shoes，且cost a long time用法不当，正确表达是take a long time。shows是错误拼写。