Shoes— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp khiến ý không được truyền đạt tự nhiên và hiệu quả. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi với một câu chủ đề rõ ràng, sau đó giải thích lý do một cách mạch lạc và sử dụng từ nối để câu trả lời trôi chảy hơn.

Ví dụ: I don't buy shoes very often because I prefer to save money. However, if I find a pair that is both stylish and practical, I might buy them. For example, last year I bought a pair of sneakers that I wear almost every day.

Gợi ý: Bạn nên trả lời câu hỏi một cách rõ ràng và sắp xếp ý theo trình tự logic. Hãy tránh lặp từ và sử dụng từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn. Ngoài ra, hãy chú ý phát âm và ngữ pháp để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn.

Ví dụ: Yes, I have bought shoes online once. I spent about 2 million Vietnamese Dong on a pair that I found on a website. Even though it was a bit expensive, the shoes are very comfortable and I have been wearing them for several years now.

Gợi ý: Câu trả lời của bạn có ý chính nhưng cần được diễn đạt rõ ràng hơn và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp. Hãy sử dụng câu chủ đề rõ ràng, giải thích lý do và dùng từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc và tự nhiên hơn.

Ví dụ: I usually spend between one to two million Vietnamese Dong on shoes. I think this price range is reasonable because very cheap shoes often have low quality, while very expensive ones are not necessary for me.

Gợi ý: Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi với câu chủ đề rõ ràng, sau đó giải thích lý do một cách mạch lạc và sử dụng từ nối để câu trả lời trôi chảy hơn. Tránh lặp từ và sửa lỗi ngữ pháp để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn.

Ví dụ: I definitely prefer comfortable shoes because I wear them for long periods. However, I also consider the style to match my taste. For instance, my mom recommended some shoes that were comfortable but didn't suit my style, so I didn't buy them.

× I actually don't want to buy lots of shoes, although I see it's really beautiful.

✓ I actually don't want to buy lots of shoes, although I see they are really beautiful.

The modal verb 'want to' is used correctly, but the pronoun 'it' is incorrect when referring to 'shoes' which is plural. The correct pronoun is 'they'. This is related to pronoun agreement, but since the instruction is to correct only grammar problems listed, this is a pronoun issue (ID 12). However, since the instruction is to only correct mistakes that meet the list, and pronoun use is ID 12, we correct it here.

× I just I mean that she was just wearing and it's kind of waste if you spend too much money on that.

✓ I just mean that she was just wearing them and it's kind of a waste if you spend too much money on that.

The pronoun 'she' is incorrect when referring to shoes; it should be 'them' for plural objects. Also, 'waste' needs an article 'a' before it. This is an incorrect use of pronouns (ID 12) and article error (ID 22). According to instructions, only correct mistakes that meet the list, so pronoun and article errors are corrected.

× Yes, definitely that's one times I don't know why but I spent 2000 feet in Dong for a shoes.

✓ Yes, definitely that's one time. I don't know why but I spent 2000 Vietnamese Dong for a pair of shoes.

The phrase 'one times' is incorrect; 'time' should be singular. Also, 'a shoes' is incorrect; 'shoes' is plural and needs 'a pair of' to be correct. This is a singular and plural issue (ID 1). Also, 'feet in Dong' is incorrect; it should be 'Vietnamese Dong' as the currency. This is a vocabulary issue but not in the list, so we focus on grammar.

× I I saw it online and although it is called for 2000 it's really really good and I still wear it right now.

✓ I saw it online and although it was sold for 2000, it's really really good and I still wear it right now.

The verb 'called' is incorrect in this context; the past tense of 'sell' is 'sold'. This is a past tense issue (ID 5). Also, 'I I' is a repetition error but not in the list, so ignored.

× It's had been hmm a few years and it's so amazing.

✓ It's been a few years and it's so amazing.

The phrase 'It's had been' is incorrect; the correct present perfect form is 'It's been'. This is a past tense issue (ID 5).

× I often want to spend around 2000 Vietnam to a million Vietnam Dong.

✓ I often want to spend around 2000 Vietnamese Dong to a million Vietnamese Dong.

The word 'Vietnam' should be 'Vietnamese' when used as an adjective for the currency. This is an incorrect use of adjectives (ID 13).

× That's a perfect four shoes because I don't want to spend a lot of money on that.

✓ That's perfect for shoes because I don't want to spend a lot of money on them.

The preposition 'four' is incorrect; it should be 'for'. Also, 'a perfect' is acceptable but 'perfect for shoes' is more natural. Also, 'on that' should be 'on them' referring to shoes. This is incorrect use of prepositions (ID 11) and pronouns (ID 12).

× Also with the really low money cannot bring the high standard.

✓ Also, really low money cannot bring high standards.

The phrase 'the really low money' is incorrect; quantifiers should be used properly without 'the' here. Also, 'the high standard' should be plural 'high standards'. This is incorrect use of quantifiers (ID 14) and incorrect use of adjectives (ID 13).

× Definitely comfortable shoes, but I will choose ones that fit to my favor.

✓ Definitely comfortable shoes, but I will choose ones that fit my preference.

The phrase 'fit to my favor' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'fit my preference' or 'fit my taste'. This is incorrect use of prepositions (ID 11) and pronouns (ID 12).

× Some of the shoes that is really convenient.

✓ Some of the shoes that are really convenient.

The verb 'is' does not agree with the plural subject 'shoes'. It should be 'are'. This is a subject-verb agreement error (ID 27) and singular and plural issue (ID 1).

× My mom introduced me a lot but because it's not fit to my like standards so I often don't buy it.

✓ My mom introduced me to a lot, but because they don't fit my standards, I often don't buy them.

The sentence has incorrect pronoun use: 'introduced me a lot' should be 'introduced me to a lot'; 'it's' should be 'they' referring to shoes; 'fit to my like standards' should be 'fit my standards'; 'buy it' should be 'buy them'. This is incorrect use of pronouns (ID 12) and prepositions (ID 11).