Shoes— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu tính tự nhiên và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi với câu chủ đề rõ ràng, tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và dùng từ vựng phù hợp. Ngoài ra, câu trả lời nên ngắn gọn, rõ ràng và có liên kết logic giữa các ý.

Ví dụ: I don't often buy shoes because I'm not very interested in fashion. The last time I bought a pair was about a year ago when I needed new running shoes. I usually buy shoes only when necessary.

Gợi ý: Bạn đã trả lời đúng trọng tâm nhưng câu trả lời còn hơi dài và có lỗi ngữ pháp. Hãy sử dụng các liên từ phù hợp để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn và chú ý ngữ pháp để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn.

Ví dụ: Yes, I have bought shoes online because there is a wide variety of options, such as different colors and sizes. Moreover, shopping online makes it easier for me to compare prices with other stores.

Gợi ý: Câu trả lời của bạn có lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng chưa chính xác. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, dùng từ vựng phù hợp và tránh dùng từ không rõ nghĩa như "UH-10". Hãy cố gắng làm câu trả lời ngắn gọn, rõ ràng và có liên kết logic.

Ví dụ: I usually don't spend much money on shoes because I'm not very interested in buying them. I prefer to buy affordable shoes, around $10, so I can save money for other things.

Gợi ý: Câu trả lời của bạn có ý rõ ràng nhưng cấu trúc câu và ngữ pháp còn yếu. Bạn nên sử dụng câu chủ đề rõ ràng, tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và dùng từ vựng phù hợp. Ngoài ra, hãy dùng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

Ví dụ: I prefer comfortable shoes rather than fashionable ones because I'm not really into fashion. I need shoes that fit well and support me when I run or go to the gym.

× I really buying shoes because I don't really interesting in fashion.

✓ I really like buying shoes because I am not really interested in fashion.

The verb 'buying' needs an auxiliary verb 'like' to form the correct expression 'like buying'. Also, 'interesting' should be 'interested' to correctly express the feeling. 'Don't really interesting' is incorrect; it should be 'am not really interested'.

× The last time I bought my wind shoes was about one year ago and I just want to buy shoes when I need the egg so it's OK.

✓ The last time I bought my wind shoes was about one year ago and I just want to buy shoes when I need them, so it's OK.

The phrase 'I just want' should be in present tense to match the habitual action. 'The egg' is incorrect and unclear; it should be 'them' referring to shoes. Also, the sentence is a run-on and could be clearer with proper conjunctions and pronouns.

× The last time I bought my wind shoes was about one year ago and I just want to buy shoes when I need the egg so it's OK.

✓ The last time I bought my wind shoes was about one year ago and I just want to buy shoes when I need them, so it's OK.

The pronoun 'the egg' is incorrect and does not refer to anything in context. It should be replaced with 'them' to correctly refer to 'shoes'.

× Yes, I have bought shoes online because there is a wide variety of options that I can choose whatever I want like the colors and the size.

✓ Yes, I have bought shoes online because there is a wide variety of options from which I can choose whatever I want, like the colors and the sizes.

The phrase 'choose whatever I want like the colors and the size' is awkward. It should be 'choose whatever I want, like the colors and the sizes' with a comma and plural 'sizes'. Also, 'from which' clarifies the choice source.

× So shopping online can be easily to for me to compare with other store.

✓ So shopping online can be easy for me to compare with other stores.

The phrase 'can be easily to for me' is incorrect. 'Easily' is an adverb and should be replaced with the adjective 'easy' to describe 'shopping online'. Also, 'other store' should be plural 'other stores'.

× So shopping online can be easily to for me to compare with other store.

✓ So shopping online can be easy for me to compare with other stores.

The preposition 'with' is not appropriate here; it should be 'to compare prices at other stores' or 'with other stores' if comparing stores. Also, 'store' should be plural 'stores'.

× I don't really spend much money on shoes because I don't really interested in buying them.

✓ I don't really spend much money on shoes because I am not really interested in buying them.

The phrase 'I don't really interested' is incorrect. The correct form is 'I am not really interested' because 'interested' is an adjective requiring a form of 'to be'.

× So umm, I only could afford UH-10 around $10 shoes.

✓ So umm, I can only afford shoes around $10.

The phrase 'I only could afford UH-10 around $10 shoes' is unclear and awkward. 'Could' should be 'can' for present ability. 'UH-10' is unclear and unnecessary. The quantifier 'only' should be placed before 'afford'.

× This way I could afford something else better.

✓ This way I can afford something better.

'Could' implies past ability; 'can' is better for present/future ability. 'Something else better' is awkward; 'something better' is clearer.

× I'll say I refer comfortable shoes rather than fashion shoes because I'm not really into fashion and just need a shoes that can fit me and helps me to running, like to do something that's suitable for my activity like working hard, do some gym.

✓ I'll say I prefer comfortable shoes rather than fashionable shoes because I'm not really into fashion and just need shoes that fit me and help me run, like doing activities suitable for me such as working hard or going to the gym.

'I refer' should be 'I prefer'. 'Fashion shoes' should be 'fashionable shoes'. 'A shoes' is incorrect; 'shoes' is plural and does not need 'a'. 'Helps me to running' should be 'help me run'. 'Like to do something that's suitable for my activity' is awkward; better is 'like doing activities suitable for me'. 'Do some gym' is incorrect; 'going to the gym' is correct.