Shoes— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Javobingizda grammatik xatolar va so'zlarni noto'g'ri ishlatish mavjud. Masalan, 'I usually buying shoes' o'rniga 'I usually buy shoes' deyish kerak. Shuningdek, gaplaringizni qisqaroq va aniqroq qilib, ortiqcha so'zlardan qoching. Gaplaringizni yaxshiroq bog'lash uchun 'because' so'zini bir marta ishlating va fikrlaringizni tartib bilan bayon qiling.

Ví dụ: I usually buy shoes because I like having different types. For example, I have two pairs of sneakers and one pair of boots. I often go to the supermarket to buy shoes, but it depends on how much money I have.

Gợi ý: Javobingizda gap tuzilishi va so'zlarni joyida ishlatishda muammolar bor. Gaplaringizni aniq va to'liq qilib, keraksiz 'uh' va takroriy so'zlardan qoching. Gaplaringizni bog'lash uchun 'because' yoki 'so' kabi bog'lovchilarni ishlating va voqeani tartibli bayon qiling.

Ví dụ: Yes, I ordered football shoes from Taobao last year because I needed them for playing sports. My sister helped me order them, and I received the shoes within 15 days.

Gợi ý: Bu savolga javob bermagansiz. Har doim savolga to'liq va aniq javob berishga harakat qiling. Javobingizda qancha pul sarflashingizni aniq raqam bilan yoki taxminan ko'rsatishingiz mumkin.

Ví dụ: I usually spend around 50 to 100 dollars on shoes, depending on the style and quality.

Gợi ý: Javobingizda grammatik xatolar mavjud, masalan, 'I not a big fan fashion' o'rniga 'I am not a big fan of fashion' deyish kerak. Shuningdek, 'too convenient shoes' o'rniga 'very comfortable shoes' deyish yaxshiroq. Gaplaringizni qisqaroq va aniq qilib, bog'lovchilar yordamida yaxshiroq bog'lang.

Ví dụ: I prefer comfortable shoes because I am not a big fan of fashion. I just want shoes that feel good. For example, last year I bought a pair of Brunella Cuccinelli shoes, which are very comfortable. I have been wearing them for two years.

× I usually buying shoes because I like different kind of shoes because, uh, I have UH-2 sneakers and one uh, boot and I go to the supermarket for buying shoe and it depends on my cash.

✓ I usually buy shoes because I like different kinds of shoes. I have two sneakers and one boot, and I go to the supermarket to buy shoes. It depends on my cash.

The verb 'buying' is incorrectly used after 'usually'; the correct form is the base verb 'buy' to express habitual action. Also, 'different kind' should be plural 'different kinds' to match plural 'shoes'. 'For buying shoe' is incorrect; it should be 'to buy shoes' to express purpose. Additionally, 'UH-2' seems unclear, so replaced with 'two' for clarity.

× I usually buying shoes because I like different kind of shoes because, uh, I have UH-2 sneakers and one uh, boot and I go to the supermarket for buying shoe and it depends on my cash.

✓ I usually buy shoes because I like different kinds of shoes. I have two sneakers and one boot, and I go to the supermarket to buy shoes. It depends on my cash.

The phrase 'different kind of shoes' is incorrect because 'kind' should be plural 'kinds' when referring to multiple types. Also, 'buying shoe' should be 'buy shoes' to match plural form.

× Yeah, of course I ordered shoes from Taobao last year, uh, I, this time I was needed, uh, football shoes for playing, uh, in sport And my sister ordered it and got, I got it these shoes within 15 days and it was.

✓ Yeah, of course I ordered shoes from Taobao last year. This time I needed football shoes for playing sports. My sister ordered them, and I got these shoes within 15 days.

The phrase 'I was needed' is incorrect; the correct past tense is 'I needed'. 'For playing, uh, in sport' should be 'for playing sports'. 'My sister ordered it' is unclear; 'them' refers to shoes. The sentence was fragmented and needed restructuring for clarity.

× Yeah, of course I ordered shoes from Taobao last year, uh, I, this time I was needed, uh, football shoes for playing, uh, in sport And my sister ordered it and got, I got it these shoes within 15 days and it was.

✓ Yeah, of course I ordered shoes from Taobao last year. This time I needed football shoes for playing sports. My sister ordered them, and I got these shoes within 15 days.

The pronoun 'it' is incorrectly used to refer to 'shoes', which is plural; the correct pronoun is 'them'. Also, 'I got it these shoes' is incorrect and redundant; 'I got these shoes' is correct.

× I prefer comfortable shoes because I don't like fashion and I not a big fan fashion because I just want to get comfortable seeing. For example, last year I bought Brinella Cuccinelli because it's too convenient shoes for me. I'm wearing it for two years.

✓ I prefer comfortable shoes because I don't like fashion and I'm not a big fan of fashion. I just want to be comfortable. For example, last year I bought Brunella Cuccinelli shoes because they are very comfortable for me. I've been wearing them for two years.

The sentence 'I not a big fan fashion' lacks the verb 'am' and the preposition 'of'. 'Get comfortable seeing' is unclear; 'be comfortable' is correct. 'It's too convenient shoes' is incorrect; 'they are very comfortable' is appropriate. 'I'm wearing it for two years' should be present perfect continuous 'I've been wearing them for two years' to indicate duration.

× I prefer comfortable shoes because I don't like fashion and I not a big fan fashion because I just want to get comfortable seeing. For example, last year I bought Brinella Cuccinelli because it's too convenient shoes for me. I'm wearing it for two years.

✓ I prefer comfortable shoes because I don't like fashion and I'm not a big fan of fashion. I just want to be comfortable. For example, last year I bought Brunella Cuccinelli shoes because they are very comfortable for me. I've been wearing them for two years.

The phrase 'a big fan fashion' is missing the preposition 'of'. Also, 'for two years' with present perfect continuous tense requires 'I've been wearing them for two years' to express duration properly.