Shoes— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is generally clear and relevant, but it could be more concise and structured. Try to start with a direct response to the question, then add specific supporting details using linking words to improve coherence. Avoid redundancy such as repeating 'occasions' and 'functions'.

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy buying shoes, but I usually purchase them only on special occasions like my birthday or parties. For example, I have a variety of shoes in different colours that match my outfits.

Gợi ý: Your answer provides relevant details but is somewhat repetitive and lengthy. Try to be more concise and use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly. Also, avoid absolute statements like 'never again' to sound more natural.

Ví dụ: Yes, I have bought shoes online once, but it was disappointing because the size didn't fit and the quality was poor compared to the pictures. Therefore, I am hesitant to shop for shoes online again.

Gợi ý: Your answer is clear and relevant, but you can improve coherence by using linking words and avoiding repetitive sentence starters like 'But'. Also, try to be more precise with vocabulary, for example, use 'casual wear' instead of 'regular wears'.

Ví dụ: The amount I spend on shoes depends on the type and occasion. For special events like my birthday, I prefer more expensive shoes, whereas for casual wear, I usually spend less. For instance, my most expensive pair cost about $300.

Gợi ý: Your answer is well-structured and relevant. To improve, try to use more varied vocabulary and linking phrases to enhance fluency and coherence. Also, avoid repeating 'regular wears' and use 'everyday activities' or similar expressions.

Ví dụ: It depends on the situation. For parties or special events, I prefer fashionable shoes, but for everyday activities like going to college or work, I choose comfortable shoes since I wear them for long periods.

× I would say in my closet I have different colors of shoes, about every color matching with all my dresses.

✓ I would say in my closet I have different colors of shoes, about every color matching all my dresses.

The phrase 'matching with all my dresses' is incorrect because 'match' does not require the preposition 'with' in this context. The correct form is 'matching all my dresses'. This is a singular and plural issue related to the correct use of verbs and prepositions with plural nouns.

× It was not as same as it was shown in the picture.

✓ It was not the same as it was shown in the picture.

The phrase 'as same as' is incorrect. The correct expression is 'the same as'. The definite article 'the' is necessary before 'same' to form the correct comparative phrase.

× But for regular wears I don't spend that much money.

✓ But for regular wear I don't spend that much money.

The word 'wears' is incorrect here; 'wear' as a noun referring to clothing or usage is uncountable and should not be pluralized. This is an incorrect use of prepositions and countable/uncountable nouns.

× If I'm going for any parties or special functions then I will go for the fashionable shoes.

✓ If I'm going to any parties or special functions then I will go for fashionable shoes.

The preposition 'for' is incorrect after 'going' when referring to attending events; the correct preposition is 'to'. Also, 'the fashionable shoes' should be 'fashionable shoes' as it refers to shoes in general, not specific ones.

× But for regular wears like for going to college or work or for a walk, I definitely prefer comfortable shoes because I have to wear them for long time.

✓ But for regular wear like going to college or work or for a walk, I definitely prefer comfortable shoes because I have to wear them for a long time.

Again, 'wears' should be 'wear' as it is uncountable. Also, 'for going' can be simplified to 'going'. Additionally, 'for long time' is missing the article 'a' and should be 'for a long time'.