Shoes— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự tự nhiên và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, khiến ý không rõ ràng. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, sử dụng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và tránh lặp từ. Hãy thêm chi tiết cụ thể và dùng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

Ví dụ: I like buying shoes, but I don't buy them often. I only have one pair that I wear for almost every occasion because it saves me money.

Gợi ý: Câu trả lời của bạn khá tốt nhưng có một số lỗi ngữ pháp và cách dùng từ chưa chính xác. Bạn nên chú ý sử dụng số nhiều đúng cách và thêm liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

Ví dụ: Yes, I have bought shoes online before. I find it very convenient because there is a wide variety of brands and styles to choose from, which makes it easy to find the best shoes. Also, shopping online saves me time since I don't have to visit physical stores.

Gợi ý: Câu trả lời của bạn có ý nhưng cấu trúc câu chưa rõ ràng và có lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, dùng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và thêm chi tiết cụ thể về số tiền và lý do chọn mua.

Ví dụ: I usually don't spend much money on shoes. I prefer simple and casual styles for everyday use, so I often buy shoes that cost less than 1,000,000 VND because they are comfortable and affordable.

Gợi ý: Câu trả lời của bạn có ý tốt nhưng câu cuối chưa hoàn chỉnh và có lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên hoàn thiện câu trả lời, sử dụng liên từ và cấu trúc câu đúng để ý tưởng rõ ràng hơn.

Ví dụ: I definitely prefer shoes that are both fashionable and comfortable because I spend most of my time walking and standing. Also, I believe wearing nice shoes shows respect to others, so a combination of style and comfort is important to me.

× I love the shoes but I don't buy it much.

✓ I love shoes but I don't buy them much.

The word 'shoes' is plural, so the pronoun referring to it should also be plural ('them' instead of 'it'). This is a singular and plural agreement issue.

× I just had one shoes for myself and I think I can wear this in every event any activities I like go and that is very save my money so I just had one shoes to go.

✓ I just have one pair of shoes for myself and I think I can wear them to every event or activity I like to go to, and that saves my money, so I just have one pair of shoes to go.

The word 'shoes' is plural and cannot be used with 'one' directly; the correct phrase is 'one pair of shoes'. Also, 'had' should be 'have' to indicate present possession. 'This' should be 'them' to refer to plural 'shoes'. The sentence also has other grammatical issues but the main problem here is singular/plural usage.

× I think I can wear this in every event any activities I like go and that is very save my money so I just had one shoes to go.

✓ I think I can wear them to every event or activity I like to go to, and that saves my money, so I just have one pair of shoes to go.

The modal verb 'can' is used correctly, but the sentence structure is confusing. The phrase 'any activities I like go' is incorrect; it should be 'any activity I like to go to'. Also, 'save' should be 'saves' to agree with the singular subject 'that'.

× I find this is very convenient because there is a quite variety of brands and style you can choose from which make it very easy to choose the best shoes for you.

✓ I find this very convenient because there is quite a variety of brands and styles you can choose from, which makes it very easy to choose the best shoes for you.

The phrase 'there is a quite variety' is incorrect; it should be 'there is quite a variety'. Also, 'style' should be plural 'styles' to match 'brands'. The verb 'make' should be 'makes' to agree with the singular subject 'which'.

× Also, shopping online save my time and you don't need to go to the physical store.

✓ Also, shopping online saves me time and you don't need to go to the physical store.

The verb 'save' should be 'saves' to agree with the singular subject 'shopping online'. Also, 'my time' should be 'me time' to indicate the benefit to the speaker.

× I usually don't spend much money on shoes, I prefer simple and casual styles to everyday, so often buy shoes that cost less than 1,000,000 feet around, which is reasonable for me and it's very comfortable to wear, but it's good.

✓ I usually don't spend much money on shoes. I prefer simple and casual styles for everyday use, so I often buy shoes that cost less than 1,000,000 feet, which is reasonable for me and very comfortable to wear, and that's good.

The sentence has several issues: 'styles to everyday' should be 'styles for everyday use'. The phrase 'but it's good' is unclear and should be 'and that's good'. Also, the sentence structure is run-on and needs to be split for clarity.

× I definitely prefer combo shoes because I spend most of time to walking and standing.

✓ I definitely prefer combo shoes because I spend most of my time walking and standing.

The phrase 'most of time to walking' is incorrect. It should be 'most of my time walking'. The preposition 'to' is unnecessary here, and 'walking' should be in the gerund form as the object of 'spend time'.

× However, I also like the shoes that good look because I believe that wearing a nice shoes is also expressed respect to other people.

✓ However, I also like shoes that look good because I believe that wearing nice shoes also expresses respect to other people.

The phrase 'the shoes that good look' is incorrect; it should be 'shoes that look good'. 'A nice shoes' is incorrect because 'shoes' is plural; it should be 'nice shoes'. 'Is also expressed' should be 'also expresses' to match the subject 'wearing nice shoes'.

× So for me a combination of style and comfort is.

✓ So for me, a combination of style and comfort is important.

The sentence is incomplete and lacks a predicate. Adding 'important' completes the sentence and clarifies the meaning.