Shoes— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 你的回答有些语法错误和表达不自然，比如“New shoes means new started for us”不太符合英语习惯。建议你用更自然的表达方式，并且注意句子结构的完整性。

Ví dụ: Yes, I like buying shoes because new shoes make me feel refreshed. I usually buy three or four pairs each year.

Gợi ý: 你的时态使用不准确，应该用现在完成时或现在时。此外，表达不够自然，建议用更地道的表达方式，并注意句子连贯。

Ví dụ: Yes, I often buy shoes online because they are cheaper and look nice. Sometimes I can find shoes for as low as CN¥30 that still look great.

Gợi ý: 你的句子结构不够清晰，语法错误较多。建议简化句子，使用正确的时态和表达方式，使意思更明确。

Ví dụ: When I buy shoes for myself, I usually choose cheap but stylish ones. However, my mom prefers expensive shoes and spends over CN¥1000 on shoes for me each year.

Gợi ý: 你的回答比较自然，但可以使用更多连接词使句子更流畅，同时避免重复表达。

Ví dụ: To be honest, I prefer fashionable shoes because although sneakers are comfortable, I find them unattractive. Therefore, I like to buy stylish shoes that match my outfits.

× New shoes means new started for us and I often buy umm 3 or 4 SH pair of shoes one year.

✓ New shoes mean a new start for us and I often buy umm 3 or 4 pairs of shoes a year.

The subject 'shoes' is plural, so the verb should be 'mean' instead of 'means'. Also, 'new started' is incorrect; it should be 'a new start'. 'SH pair of shoes' is unclear, likely a typo, so corrected to 'pairs of shoes'. 'One year' should be 'a year' for natural expression.

× Yes, I often bought shoes online as it's cheap price and pretty looks.

✓ Yes, I often buy shoes online as they are cheap and look pretty.

The adverb 'often' indicates habitual action, so present tense 'buy' is appropriate instead of past tense 'bought'. Also, 'it's cheap price and pretty looks' is incorrect; it should be 'they are cheap and look pretty' to refer to shoes.

× I can even buy the shoes like CN¥30 and look great.

✓ I can even buy shoes for about CN¥30 and they look great.

The phrase 'like CN¥30' is incorrect; 'for about CN¥30' is the correct prepositional phrase to indicate price. Also, 'the shoes' is unnecessary; 'shoes' is sufficient. Added 'they' to clarify the subject of 'look great'.

× If it's myself to buy shoes for me, then I choose some cheap shoes and stylish shoes.

✓ If I buy shoes for myself, then I choose some cheap and stylish shoes.

The phrase 'If it's myself to buy shoes for me' is ungrammatical. It should be 'If I buy shoes for myself' to correctly express the subject and reflexive pronoun. Also, 'some cheap shoes and stylish shoes' is redundant; combined as 'some cheap and stylish shoes'.

× If it's my mom bought shoes for me, she thinks that expensive shoes are are the best.

✓ If my mom buys shoes for me, she thinks that expensive shoes are the best.

The conditional clause should use present tense 'buys' instead of past tense 'bought' to match the present tense main clause 'she thinks'. Also, removed duplicate 'are'.

× So she yearly cost like over CN¥1000 to buy me some shoes.

✓ So she spends over CN¥1000 yearly to buy me some shoes.

The verb 'cost' is incorrect here; 'spends' is appropriate for describing money spent. Also, 'yearly cost like over' is awkward; 'over CN¥1000 yearly' is clearer.

× To be honest, I prefer fashionable shoes because I find sneakers nowadays are comfortable but ugly, so I don't want to buy some sneakers.

✓ To be honest, I prefer fashionable shoes because I find that sneakers nowadays are comfortable but ugly, so I don't want to buy any sneakers.

Added 'that' after 'find' for correct sentence structure. Also, 'some sneakers' in negative sentences is better replaced with 'any sneakers'.